dude needs a lot of work. I feel the main instrument is cool but needs some effects. some structure and change of some sounds plus a real beat. this could be nice with some work. sounds like it was made off a keyboard with minimal tracks.
This has a good vibe. The melody is nice. the drums are small and low in volume don't know if you meant to do that or not. I would make the drums louder then add an effect to make them set in the background if that's what you were going for. nice tho
808 and kick hit at the same time almost every time. so the kick might be more noticeable when the hit starts but then the 808 carries the note out maybe sounding like it drops the pitch. could be the 808 and vst I use.
I like the drums but some of the sounds are clashing with each other's frequencies. the mix needs help as well. overall good idea.it sounds better toward the end.
on my speakers, I felt I missed a lot of the low end of the mix. might just be my Adams but I feel I'm trying to add highs with these speakers. still good song thanks for sharing