Might I just say... It's good to be back. My computer crapped the bed, and I was down and out for a while. I have finally managed to upgrade to a new PC, and I've started dabbling again. Here's my latest work in progress:
I use Canva to make my cover art and toss a subtle animation on it. After that, I just import it to Windows Movie Maker and copy and paste until it matches the length of the audio. Here's a sample of one of my videos:
I'm digging the west coast vibes this beat gives off. I would personally add some kind of bassline in the back to fill it out a bit more, but you've done well with this one!
This would make for an excellent boss battle theme for a video game. I would recommend fiddling a bit with individual volumes, but this beat was overall quite pleasing to listen to.
Smooth beat, dude! Although if I had to pick out something to criticize, I would personally like to see a bit more changeups. There were a few points where I was waiting for something else to happen and didn't get anything, but all in all, real nice piece.
Very nice beat overall. If I pick it apart, it sounds like the 808 has too many glides that sort of distract from the rest of the beat, but it sounds good otherwise. The mix is solid, and it's a good beat to chill to.
So... I'm in love with this one, but it feels like something might be slightly off. I can't quite put my finger on it. But that might just be me. I would love some feedback.
This is the most detailed review I've received so far. Thanks for the input! I think my biggest mistake is forgetting that I'm writing an instrumental and trying to give the ear a lot of stuff to listen to. I'll try to pay more attention to that in the future. Thanks again!
Hmm... It's real smooth, but something feels a slight bit chaotic (maybe timings are slightly off?). If that's what you were going for, then great. It definitely adds a touch of mild confusion, which could be amplified with the right vocals.