Hmm... It's real smooth, but something feels a slight bit chaotic (maybe timings are slightly off?). If that's what you were going for, then great. It definitely adds a touch of mild confusion, which could be amplified with the right vocals.
Sounds good to me. The hi hat tail off seems to distract me slightly with the rest of the beat like it’s off doing it’s own thing dancing to another tune but overall I like it man.