"West Coast Iranian Vibe" LmaoFade's "Dirty Back Alley Bedroom Retarded" Review:
@Amnesia - Really dope intro. What stood out to me was that snare! Good track overall, the gunshots add some nice flavor.
@A.R. DASUPASTAR - It's the drums. I think I mentioned this in an episode of AOTB - try using a drum loop already made and build on that. Stick with that piano at the beginning and add some delay to it.
@Armani - Very hype beat. Well done. Good mix. If anything it sounds like music playing in a chase scene for a movie like Mission Impossible. Like Tom Cruise is running after some guy in an Iranian market.
@Face Valid - Very dope. At first I thought the vocal snippets were a bit too much but they fit very well. Dope vibe. I just wish the drums had just a bit more hype to them.
@FrankyZ - I really like this industrial type of sound. I wasn't sure at first but then realized it works. I would love to hear lyrics over this.
@Fury Beats - The synth in reverse sounds good but when the drums come in for me it's anti-climactic. I like the mellow vibe of the track, I think the drums should be more prominent though.
@guitardep - Piano is super smooth. Drums could hit a bit harder. Bass is slightly heavy but good. Guitar is on point, of course!
@Iron Keys - I'm cripple walking right now with my walker. Nice bounce. Drums smack nicely. The percussion just throws me off a bit. I'm getting a tad bit of West Coast Iranian vibe.
@KiloOnTheBeat - Intro is a bit long but transitions nicely into the beat. The mix is on point. Drums and low end are just right. Melody is nice, just could use a slight variation at one point.
@LiveLargeBeats - I really like this beat. Piano twiddle on the right is nice. Drums and strings are well done. The only thing is the mix - the whole thing just sounds hollow like it's in another room almost. What happened?
@Mahlhavoc - Good job on the drums, hits nicely. I really like the scary sounds in this one. It's just the string melody is okay, I would stick with the scary low end.
@Mefisto Beats - I really like this one because it's hype, it's just that bass end just throws me off a bit. I was waiting for a variation of it at one point. But the drums are nice, and the organ(?) near the end is really good.
@pressBIBLEthump - Just like that other beat, I would say use a drum break first and work around that. That synth at the beginning plus a dope drum break would be a great place to start.
@sicalbeats - Nice little string loop at the start, but really nice once it changes up. Drums hit nicely. Good vocal snippets and scratches.
@Vossi Beats - Nice intro. Drums are on point. Bass is a bit much, I was waiting for some changeups on that. The melody is dope though, I like how it changes. Good transitions.
@YannFer - Horns are dope. I thought the beginning was just the loop and you had drums on top, but realized those are the drums. I think the sample you have plus some harder drums would be dope! Good composition though.
My Takes:
@Mahlhavoc That shit was fire, absolutely killed the atmosphere. Fuck with it.
@Fury Beats eh could have put more thought ino it tbh. the base was great but you should've taken it somewhere better. like can't u feel how repetitive it gets? it needs something on top of it and a good mix and it's pro tier.
@Iron Keys I heard @Face Valid 's beat and said to myself "Oh Shit, so Iron DID get fire ready for this", then I heard the one against it and thought ehh if I was going for something storchy the "Iron keys" one (1st one) is a more valid choice. I did doubt that both could be you ngl. unlucky draw.
@Mefisto Beats BRO you down to collab? (Really tho)
@YannFer Musical n stylish as always. you just need a better production, yk? like the composition is good, vibes are THERE, but it needs to all be put together, yk? Love it, but has to be produced.
@Amnesia You're one of my new favorites out here with that. the backed-up shit talk, the solid production, most importantly the name choice. awesome stuff, keep it up.
@guitardep I'll dm you on that, keep the beat file.
congrats to everyone who won which is everyone who witnessed this whole thing, bigger congrats to Amnesia, I think it's his first time placing so high, same with @FrankyZ & @KiloOnTheBeat also to @Mefisto Beats, if bro had a slightly better mix he could have been higher.
and pappas obviously sucks idk how he keeps ending up up there.