Cold Truth
IllMuzik Moderator
well, nas took it there for a minute conceptually.... second childhood was an ill idea, but he flipped it in such a generic way lyrically,.. like when he sais "she's in her second childhood" i'm like, ok, whatever happened to subtlety? concepts like that are better alluded to, and when you come out and say "now he's in his second childhood" its like there was a creative block there, so that instead of skillful descriptions completing the task, its like "in case you didnt get it...." and never mind the fact that the title says it all in regards to the theme. ..... any how i think that it is things like this that get overlooked in writing.
how about studying up on the way they did things in the classical era? production wise, look at the four seasons.... vivaldi took that into four distincitve moods that flowed flawlessly together...nas once again, the guy who did the beat for "one mic" did an excellent job (am i the only one who recognizes this as an obvious reinterpritation of "in the tonight"?) of telling the story with the beat. hip hop can stand to use real choruses and bridges as a staple and not a rarity..... but that doesnt mean tht other formats do not have a place.
how about studying up on the way they did things in the classical era? production wise, look at the four seasons.... vivaldi took that into four distincitve moods that flowed flawlessly together...nas once again, the guy who did the beat for "one mic" did an excellent job (am i the only one who recognizes this as an obvious reinterpritation of "in the tonight"?) of telling the story with the beat. hip hop can stand to use real choruses and bridges as a staple and not a rarity..... but that doesnt mean tht other formats do not have a place.