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Edgar
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@oninkaf put together pretty nice, I would fix that bassline though
@Klypse like how you shuffled the sample, but same thing, bassline seems kinda out of tone
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been a while, but i'm getting back into the routine @Fade I haven't forgot about you
@Klypse like how you shuffled the sample, but same thing, bassline seems kinda out of tone
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been a while, but i'm getting back into the routine @Fade I haven't forgot about you
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@S3oulC1ty thx for feedback bro. Loved your beat. That baseline is king. I'm not good at making my own baseline unless the sample already has a baseline in it, but I'm good at chopping and mixing it up
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ProjktNorthWind
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ProjktNorthWind
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@oninkaf nice track. I'm wondering about that second sax too...seems a little out of key. you already know about that bass.
@Klypse I like that breakdown/bridge, but it seems those vocals are out of pitch, unless you were going for that. cool beat.
@Edgar I don't know much but it sounds like you really layered those sounds. cool idea, but can get a little overwhelming.
@S3oulC1ty you already know man. banging beat. i like those drums, well balanced sounds. bass line eats that beat up. ill shit dude.
alright fellas there's some feedback. please feel free to leave me some feedback, I don't trust my ears too much, so all suggestions to make my shit better is much appreciated. it takes about a minute and :20 sec to get to the "hook", so...
I kind of went minimalist on this one.
@Klypse I like that breakdown/bridge, but it seems those vocals are out of pitch, unless you were going for that. cool beat.
@Edgar I don't know much but it sounds like you really layered those sounds. cool idea, but can get a little overwhelming.
@S3oulC1ty you already know man. banging beat. i like those drums, well balanced sounds. bass line eats that beat up. ill shit dude.
alright fellas there's some feedback. please feel free to leave me some feedback, I don't trust my ears too much, so all suggestions to make my shit better is much appreciated. it takes about a minute and :20 sec to get to the "hook", so...
I kind of went minimalist on this one.
Thanx for your feed, now, i like the idea allot but I just cant get over that drum track though. I would take the more natural approach to it, some thicker kicks and maybe some kind of clappy snare. but all in all very nice. congrats on the beat this win btw
yeah I think you already know that basically no one here can touch your beats. you have (in my opinion) the most recognizable sound in this community. On almost every Beat this! comp. I can tell which one is yours
btw, what do you use for you bass lines, mine are often way too flat :/
ProjktNorthWind
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@oninkaf, thanks man for the feedback. I can imagine having a bit more on the low end being desirable to the ears. Good idea. I'll try it out and see what you think. Some natural sounding percussion might be nice, i can def imagine a clap or a snap in there. Thanks.Thanx for your feed, now, i like the idea allot but I just cant get over that drum track though. I would take the more natural approach to it, some thicker kicks and maybe some kind of clappy snare. but all in all very nice. congrats on the beat this win btw
@S3oulC1ty of all the beats i have heard on here so far, you prolly the slickest. your basslines remind me of waajeed (detroit producer). nice flip moe.
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Nothing here yet.haven't done this in a while. Let's see what's what
@oninkaf - horns was a nice touch, the bassline kinda sounded like it needs more volume, so i couldnt really tell if it was in tune with the rest of the track.
@Klypse you definitely used alot of different parts of the sample! but around the 1:10 mark where the strings came in, sounded like the bassline was fighting it a lil.
ProjktNorthWind
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here's a second attempt..at something.
feedback appreciated.
thanks