thanks, but it wouldnt let me download it, so I found another copy on youtube.
The Flying Guitar - "Jeux Interdits"
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crosstevsky
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sounds good, nice arrangement and overall composition...but I'm dissapointed on how little you used from the actual sample...i would switch that brass with someting smoother, piano maybe...that flute is dope dough.
Its only the third beat Ive ever made in FL, give a guy a break hahahahaha. Im really loving working it out though.
crosstevsky
beats architect
Oh, sorry, if this is one of those "learning beats" than it's super dope.
Nice groove but this could really use a little bit of variation and a change up or two.
crosstevsky
beats architect
Well...let me check it on my headphones...this deserves special attention... 
crosstevsky
beats architect
Oh now this is now more like it... as previous... nice composition and chord changes. Make the kick harder, remove that samba whistle or cricket (I don't know what it is) and you're good to go
I feel better... Thanks :biggrin:I try to please hahahahahaOh now this is now more like it... as previous... nice composition and chord changes. Make the kick harder, remove that samba whistle or cricket (I don't know what it is) and you're good to go
crosstevsky
beats architect
Well... then check my flip, and tell me what you think...
Yes very different, Im not sure if that drum pattern really works, everything else seems to be on point
@Dez-NYCe This is a dope flip, just enough variation to keep things interesting. Good work.
@nottr This is really nice, the drums bang, good variation throughout, kept me interested all the way to the end.
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Im getting there hahahahaha
@crosstevsky yeah Im really feeling your flip, its interesting watching and seeing how you used the sample. Good work man.
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crosstevsky
beats architect
Yeah? Thanks...Just in time...I was about to start my second flip..
Ive finished my second flip now, cleaned up the mix, and changed that sound @crosstevsky was talking about, added some more obvious variation so its not too repetitive. Starting to get to grips with the FL workflow now, its growing on me pretty fast.
Nothing here yet.
crosstevsky
beats architect
Sounds a lot better, congratulations on putting up such production while learning a new daw. When I'm learning a new daw usualy the result is: destroyed mouse, inventing new curse words, disturbed mental health, and a crappy 1 bar drum loop...
It took me a while to get past the 1 bar crappy drum loop stage, as for mixing, its pretty universal, the only differences are routing methods and which stock plugins are available, and how good they are.Sounds a lot better, congratulations on putting up such production while learning a new daw. When I'm learning a new daw usualy the result is: destroyed mouse, inventing new curse words, disturbed mental health, and a crappy 1 bar drum loop...
I think Im finally past the point of being overwhelmed by the interface, Im banging beats together quicker than I have in years.
@smokaz yeah that was def awesome
@YannFer really love that style
@Dez-NYCe great flip
@crosstevsky those drums hit so good
@Edgar man thats so smooth
@2GooD Productions oh wow feels royal, both are fire
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this is the first beat i got up to 2 mins. its a little closer to dubstep than hip hop i guess
thanks for the crits, im still really new
@YannFer really love that style
@Dez-NYCe great flip
@crosstevsky those drums hit so good
@Edgar man thats so smooth
@2GooD Productions oh wow feels royal, both are fire
first time poster
this is the first beat i got up to 2 mins. its a little closer to dubstep than hip hop i guess
thanks for the crits, im still really new