@Spuntastic - Thanks for the welcome and thanks for the pointer, I agree. As far as your track, I like what you have but I can't think of any suggestions.
@KoalityBeats - I like your track too, totally chill, digging the chimes
@crog85 - Thanks for the welcome. You may have heard some off notes, the only thing I added was the drums, bass, and weird thing in the middle. I started making beats about a year ago, but it was more electronic. I decided to focus on hip hop specifically about a month ago because everything was trying to drift that way anyway. This was actually the first time I ever chopped and sampled a song, and should be able to tighten that up as I go.