I can only do a shitty speaker test right now.
The texture of the vocal sounds good.
I think the level of the vocal sounds good.
But I do sometimes have difficulty picking out words; can't tell if this is down to individual or multiple factors, but my initial feelings are
- the vocal level sometimes feels like it dips; can't tell if this if because of compression or lack of it on the vocal itself, the compression on the master squishing the beat n vocals too hard,
- could be down to the vocal delivery; sounds a bit slurred / 'lazy' vibe
Sounds like you got a real heavy bass in there(?) it could be causing the compressor to 'choke' the mix.
The overall track sounds dope tho, brother.