Showcase - September 28 - October 4, 2015
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tomkillsjerry
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Because future beats .
Marc Duncan
The Black Man
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Beautiful Noise
No Song is Safe.
Battle Points: 8
SERIOUSLY?! This dude's a trip and a half, coming in here since he joined, posting beats with NO FEEDBACK, then has the nerve to curse at this community because someone called him on it. Then this bullshit comment, just so he can post his beats. FOH with that bullshit homie!
This sounds like some cinematic shit! I can picture this beat playing during the climax of a movie or maybe during the rolling credits at the end of a movie. Dope yo!
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tomkillsjerry
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well i feel fortunate to be the first Duncan feedback haha
Marc Duncan
The Black Man
Battle Points: 3
I'VE BEEN DOING THIS FOUR MONTHS DICKHEAD!! You really want somebody with only four months experience to tell you what's good and bad about your beats? Don't you think that's a little arrogant???!!
tomkillsjerry
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dude the thing about it is you dont have to be a pro to give feedback most people who listen to music have no idea how it was made but they can tell you what they like about it and what they dont. thats really all anyone is asking ive only been making music for a year but I try to give advice the best i can. and im not goin to hate on you for not giving feedback just as long as you dont think someone owes it to you to listen to your stuff. you'll learn alot of this business is building relationships with other creative people.
King Drew Xlll
Member
Battle Points: 1
This is dope dude, the synth work and that bassline is nice! The vocal sample really is like the cherry on top too. I like what you did. I can def hear this on a soundtrack or a pop radio hit!
^^ i cant wait till this kid is dealt with lmao. My gawd the ignorance!
heres a new one im working on. Trying to perfect my sound and get better at mixing all feedback and tips appreciated
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tomkillsjerry
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nice the mix sounds clean dope beat thought it maybe could use some sort of bridge @ 2:45 but nice work none the less
King Drew Xlll
Member
Battle Points: 1
I agree lol, I tried to come up with something the first time but I didnt like it so I took it out and just let it ride till the last hook but youre right the emotion at 2:45 builds for something new. back to the drawing board! Thanks for the feedback brother
TheRealAGE
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I like the beat. I feel like the 808 need some more juice!! The one thing i didnt like is the beat breaks when it first drops. It just sounded off to me. i thought my internet was glitching at first.
And here is a new one i dropped today
And here is a new one i dropped today
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tomkillsjerry
ILLIEN
dope song really nice sounding mix too awesome work my dude
made this one kind of clams casino chill vibe
TheRealAGE
Newbie
thanks man. your beat is dope. i like all the elements. i think your percussion needs more umph to it! try some new york style compression to make it pop out!!
King Drew Xlll
Member
Battle Points: 1
Yeah I see what you mean about the 808, ill make it pop more, aint nothing camel crusher cant fix! lol And when you say beat breaks are you talking about at 38 secs? I wasn't sure if it fit or not, glad someone noticed, ill smooth it out
This one is dope too, but I agree with AGE, I had my monitors almost all the way up and the drums were lacking in punch and pop! otherwise another nice production tom!
Hey guys took your suggestions and this is the new version would love to know what you guys think
@TheRealAGE - Took the glitch effect off and gave the 808 more juice!
@tomkillsjerry - added a bridge @ 2:45
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tomkillsjerry
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That was D.O.P.E. AF. nice work my dude
Just Did this one today working on sampling more kind of a boom-bap feel
Zuance
https://soundcloud.com/ct_roet
Battle Points: 1
this sounds really cool, at first i was not digging it but after a few listens i like it!
this is so great man! so many strange sounds
this is my latest beat, on the soon the be released WARPRIDDIMS tape. i appreciate any feedback
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tomkillsjerry
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Sounds awesome would be a great intro track
just messing with samples all day just made this with a blues guitar sample
NatureRok
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 1
lol
yo.. i dug this.. i freestyled to it.. i like the cadence.. pretty simple sound wise.. but i have a feeling that was the goal.. peace...
i thought this was nice.. i could hear this on a mixtape.. i like the kicks.. i can hear the difference between both versions.. dope shit cuzzin
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thesoulcreates
Newbie
This beat is mixed nicely. I expected to hear a little more progression with the keys and more variation overall but great work overall.
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