I'm really proud of this beat Enjoy
I like the vibe of this. It reminds of early UK dubstep like Skream. Drums are cool but maybe too high compared to instrumentation. Like the instruments but seem very far back in mix maybe because of reverb. But cool tune.
Rap sad storytelling beat.
Reminds me of computer game music from early 90s. The melody / harmony is nice and I like the driving quality of the piano line. I like the hi hat trills too. I think what would improve is more dynamics to the drums as they are quite flat and quiet in the mix.
Will post feedback tomorrow
Put my hands up and say I hadn't heard the original. And it's a cool track so thanks for turning me on to it! Your remix is good because you successfully changed the style and tone but the vocals still gel nicely. I head Michael Jackson's Human Nature chords in the background? I like those chords. I think drums are the weak point of the track, I think you could pick better sounds and the groove is a bit too mechanical.
Another banger! Good arrangement and I like how the synth is very rhythmic and changes up. Really good drums and low end. Synths sound a bit tinny but that might be intentional. Could see people using this in an advert for something exciting!
Definitely got that dark trap vibe. Nice pads. The bass moves quite a lot, I thought maybe if you deleted a few notes and gave it more space that would help.