@Digitali Musix Thanks for the feedback. Im glad you found it unique, thats what Im really going for, something new and different, I want to create a new style of music if I can, an infusion of classical/soundtrack, boom bap and trap. Been really inspired by Hans Zimmer lately so want to start working on some classical/soundtrack music of my own, there is fucking huge amounts of money in it, and I mean fucking mahoosive. Just gotta git gud.
Listening to your track and it sounds off from the start. You should filter out the extreme low end below 30 - 40 hz on the bass instruments, this is inaudible to the ear and will prevent you from making it bassy in the right frequencies which are usually around 50hz - 200hz. The bassline is usually boosted around 60hz to 80hz and the kick is usually around 80hz to 200hz. With presence added at around 500hz to 800hz, boosting here will help a kick being visible on shitty full range speakers. With bass the boom comes from 60hz and the muddyness can be taken away by cutting around 300hz. These figures are guidelines as it really depends on the sounds being equed. You need to use panning on your sounds too. There is only so much space to work with(headroom), slightly pan hi hats to the left and shakers to the right so that they play off of each other. Use panning on instruments so that they can question and answer each other, question on the left and answer on the right, get creative, play around, you will learn loads doing so. You arent necessarily trying to get all the sounds to be heard at the same loudness, for each sound a place in the frequency and stereo field. Your track generally sounds like everything is competing in the same center area to be heard. The only way to train your ears is with lots and lots of practice. Stick with it and you will get there, eventually.
Also to note, the drums are really lost in the mix, try to use minimal reverb on the kicks and basslines, when mixing always start with the kick drum and bassline, once they are mixed everything else should be mixed to them as they are usually the loudest parts of a song and you dont want to over power them with anything else.