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its what I do. I get tired of Listening to peoples shitty beats. and actually give them feedback. Im just going to start tagging them and sayin
TRASH
GARBAGE
DUMPSTER FIRE
QUIT NOW
I know right, its not like I dont have anything better to do than sit and listen to shitty beats and go out of my way to give honest constructive feedback to help others grow and develop their skill set to become better producers. Its how I grew as a producer. I dont get the mentality.
 

NONONSENSEBEATS

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@2GooD Productions Yo that first one is some funky pimp action shit lol. I dig it. Everything is in its place sounds good.
The second one is pretty dope too. Beat fits the vocals very well. Nice job on both of these bro.

@tomkillsjerry The "Obsidian" is fresh bro. Very atmospheric. Bass and kick sound real good together.
"Indifference" is dark. I could hear that ol rob a ma fucka flow on this. That deep synth is a nice a touch.
"R.O.Y" is dark as hell too. The bass is a bit heavy in this one but I do like the overall vibe of it.
"Day Dreamers" is my shit bro. Smooth, relaxing, and still has that heavy vibe. Bass is alil strong on this one too but not too bad.
"Hos and Tricks" damn man this one is a trunk shaker. Maybe filter that bass just a little bit.
Overall your beats are fire man. I'm really digging almost all of them. Great work
 

ApeMade

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Been awhile but here y'all go
Nothing here yet.

I can hear some potential. I think it would suit it best with your progressions, with better sound selection. Try addinga type of riff to the strings more, to really bring it out. Add a groove to the drums
 

ApeMade

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hey.. i kinda new here hit me up!!

You have a good idea going. Simple, but somewhat catchy. Ambient, I like that. It could use more mids for the leads to stand. "doesnt sound as full" Keep it up! As for your other mixes, they sound good. Some areas, to me, like the "If it dont turn you on": That was a good mix, Only part to me was, the Pianos, didnt go as well, to suit the track. But a great concept! Maybe change it up a bit with chord adjusting, and lower the tone volume, to blend with the hidden Guitars ect, in the backround to stand it out. "Strictly High Grade" Was cool! I like that Idea, but the drums need some work. Add a groove to that, it should pop well. Otherwise, Keep up the good work.
 

ApeMade

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Really liked the Obsidiean! Great drums, and sound ambient. Sounds nice and full, yet again, the only sound that i thought to me, that didnt suit, was the Main Lead on the hook. Maybe Tone it down a tad, as it takes over the whole track hiding all other sounds. "Balancing"... I liked the way you pan'ed the lead though, other wise, Great potential track and sounds good the way you laid it out.

I really like "Indifference" The right sounds were used, and the style is catchy! You have a Chillstep vibe going and going hard at the same time. Its unique and it makes sense.

":Roy" Goes Hard and bass seems a little too distorted on high ends, but im sure that was on purpose, to follow the idea of the track, Only thing to me was, some notes, were off with the bass line, with the main melody of the song, but as you know, Everyone has different ears, with hearing music differently. Cool tracks man, and seems like you have a nice style to your work, with a blend of Bassy and Ambient. Keep up the Good work!
 

tomkillsjerry

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@ApeMade really Dig hip Hop is back. the way the horns are flipped and slightly out of tune compliments everything else
Thumpy kick has the same thing with the horns i dig that. low end sounds s tad muddy but it vibes
Bell ringer is dope af like the 808 slides and wavy feel
feel the heart has that same low end mud. i think the kick and bass are the problem maybe high pass your kick to 50hz and run a sidechain comp to the bass and that should get it

And on mine yea i went with that lead because it was different and lifts the whole track from your standard OVO type beat.
with that indifference beat ive been trying to find creative ways to ad my guitar in my tracks. everything but the drums and bass are all played by me
ROY yea i blew out the bass with camel crusher on purpose just liked the way it sounded.
 

ApeMade

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@ApeMade really Dig hip Hop is back. the way the horns are flipped and slightly out of tune compliments everything else
Thumpy kick has the same thing with the horns i dig that. low end sounds s tad muddy but it vibes
Bell ringer is dope af like the 808 slides and wavy feel
feel the heart has that same low end mud. i think the kick and bass are the problem maybe high pass your kick to 50hz and run a sidechain comp to the bass and that should get it

And on mine yea i went with that lead because it was different and lifts the whole track from your standard OVO type beat.
with that indifference beat ive been trying to find creative ways to ad my guitar in my tracks. everything but the drums and bass are all played by me
ROY yea i blew out the bass with camel crusher on purpose just liked the way it sounded.

Thanks for the feedback. Yes, all the ones ive had uploaded, were Mp3 wav, So the quality track isnt the best sound, yet agian, you dont want it to be all "Clipping" in other auido speakers. Meaning, Certian tracks, should sound good in all speakers. The Hop hop ones, are ok to me, these were just one of my ok ones, and yet to released all my good hiphops..And were original no samps. I tryed to make it unuiqe to those with the Sax sound lol. Glad you dig that sound because its what i was hoping others caught off gaurd to know and understand the story or feeling behind the track.
Trap one, "Bell ringer," was something that took me a while to consider to work on it again, I havnt touched it since last year when i made it, finally to touch it up last week, to release. It does hit really hard in my Subwoofers in the whip.
Rnb one, was my latest Original, the Mp3 really killed the low mid end. Yet agian, for certian Genres, suits different tuning, which im still theorizing on even till today. lol.
Main reason why Ive tuned most of my bass low end and kicks, is because i have a Custom Tuned Subwoofers, in the whip, to 32 Hrz, and let me tell ya, Best bass sound you wouldnt hear from head phones or reg, monitors. A whole new feeling once in a tuned set up. Clean and Clear, Most of my newer stuff are tuned to 32hrz, to 40 or so, with low ends, to match hidden bass that wil blow ppl away :D lol..
 
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And on mine yea i went with that lead because it was different and lifts the whole track from your standard OVO type beat.
with that indifference beat ive been trying to find creative ways to ad my guitar in my tracks. everything but the drums and bass are all played by me
ROY yea i blew out the bass with camel crusher on purpose just liked the way it sounded.[/QUOTE]

Thats great you are doing originals! I respect anyone who does for a passion. The bass do sound cool and that distortion is unique! Keep up the good work man, and hope to hear more soon from you.
 

ApeMade

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yo wazup fam pls give me some nice response on my new beat! loveyaall


Cool feel! I like the pluck and deep feel. Yet again, It sounds like every single ones out there with the same chord progressions. Although it has a good selection of sounds, the Drums are a bit over powering, with kick. Tuned the drums, it should be a clean track after.
 

ApeMade

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@ApeMade yea Im running a sub in my studio might be the SC coding
Im in the middle of doing a beat a day at least i'll do 3 or 4 a day usually. Ive been producing for about 3 and half years. still got a ways to go.

people seem to like this one



I really dig the sounds on this one and ambients! Very chillax and a listeners type feel. Really dig that guitar! Thats what brought the track to its story! It wont need artists lol. Good work! I usually listen to alot of things without artists. Takes me to a new place of comfort. You also have to remember, in the world of being really a good producer, = Quality over Quantity. ... Its always a plus for consistency, but the lack of effort to work on projects, to its full potential, (To other listeners normal listeners) wouldn't satisfy them to keep listening if, quality isnt there. Back in the days of 2005 and upish, I used to rush all of those too, and made countless ones every week, Thinking, ive had it down. Only to go back through my old projects, even if it sounds good with chords ect, I instantly, knew, It was armature and needing tons of work, Most of them kept repeating over and over, which got boring to Listeners ect. With your concept, I think you should take more time on your craft, to really master each track of your own, to really grab attention to your style. You would make it far and quick. Here are my "Old work" from 06 ish and up some. www.soundclick.com/ApeMade
 
Cool feel! I like the pluck and deep feel. Yet again, It sounds like every single ones out there with the same chord progressions. Although it has a good selection of sounds, the Drums are a bit over powering, with kick. Tuned the drums, it should be a clean track after.


thanks for the response man !
 
You have a good idea going. Simple, but somewhat catchy. Ambient, I like that. It could use more mids for the leads to stand. "doesnt sound as full" Keep it up! As for your other mixes, they sound good. Some areas, to me, like the "If it dont turn you on": That was a good mix, Only part to me was, the Pianos, didnt go as well, to suit the track. But a great concept! Maybe change it up a bit with chord adjusting, and lower the tone volume, to blend with the hidden Guitars ect, in the backround to stand it out. "Strictly High Grade" Was cool! I like that Idea, but the drums need some work. Add a groove to that, it should pop well. Otherwise, Keep up the good work.
thanks for the feedback, just wanted to say, it seems you have mixed two of us together in your feedback. No worries though, its all good. Have you posted a beat for feedback? if so I cant see it.
 
@ApeMade yea Im running a sub in my studio might be the SC coding
Im in the middle of doing a beat a day at least i'll do 3 or 4 a day usually. Ive been producing for about 3 and half years. still got a ways to go.

people seem to like this one


this could so easily be on a movie soundtrack, im gonna start learning how to make trap beats.
 
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