I appreciate all of the feedback guys. I am a college student with limited funds. All I am using as of now is Logic 9. I will definitely look into some software. This is probably the wrong place for this, but could anyone point me in the right direction for mixing/mastering to get that really professional dynamic sound?
ItewNako: I'm with Fade on this one. I'm digging the ambient feel of this. The heavy bass really makes this thing go, so to speak. However, the change-up you do around 2:00 seems a little out of place. I would consider revising it to fit the melody you created at the beginning a little better. But overall great work!
Here is another beat. It's only 1 verse, but check it out