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arta

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@S3oulC1ty I need to sit down with you and learn basslines one day. Amazing work with the sample chops as always.
@Marc Duncan Great work with this, I can also hear Pusha T on this as well. I'd bring in the low pass filter variation earlier by the 2nd verse.
@lloopz NIce chops. Snare seems a tad too loud.
@TeeJay Sounds I like this. Snare and kick seem a tad too low in the mix. You should also sync the vocals better to the beat. I used to have trouble doing that back in the day with Cool Edit.
@Pokieondatrax Was so loud it made me jump with my headphones on. Could be mixed better, brass stabs are too loud for the mix, kick and snare are so low in the mix they are overpowered by the snare roll.
@DEEZ BEATZ Yeah love the first beat, very interesting to listen to all the way through!
Second beat is also smooth. At first I was expecting the drumwork to be more dramatic but I realize you're aiming for a more spacey feel. Maybe you could emphasize the synths and fx a bit more to fill it out.
@TheWorkingMan Quite the forlorn beat. I looked up the artistes you were matching and it's pretty similar, I think even with this minimalist style you have to do a little something more with the cinematic drone going on in the beat.

PC's on the fritz this week, here's two older beats.

 
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ace wonder

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Zelda sample, Trap beat?

Hey I'm a 16 year old producer from the uk.

Wondering if i could get your feedback on this beat.



 
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Shawn Mills

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Im new to the community and just wanted to showcase a quick production i finished yesterday to get some feedback, thanks in advance for listening

 
Im new to the community and just wanted to showcase a quick production i finished yesterday to get some feedback, thanks in advance for listening


Not bad for a quick production. I think the pianos are too loud and might have to much reverb. I also think the drums are really good just too quiet to have the impact they could have. The synth in there also sounds decent but is drowned out by other sounds in the mix. Needs some work but could be good.

Hey im TC a uk producer and rapper who is new here, thanks to @OGBama for recommending me. Any feedback is appreciated and should be reciprocated.
 
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