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djc
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@toryhooks I really like the melody. I would maybe change up the kick pattern once in a while
@HVYW8 I really like the sample and how you used it. The hi-hats are a little quiet, I would say. The drums sound a little off-beat or something, but maybe that's just me
. Good work!
@Ways I really like the melody and the vibe it gives me. The drums are also good, I would just maybe change the hi-hat pattern.
Here's mine. I'm also a real beginner, so any feedback is welcomed!
@HVYW8 I really like the sample and how you used it. The hi-hats are a little quiet, I would say. The drums sound a little off-beat or something, but maybe that's just me
. Good work!@Ways I really like the melody and the vibe it gives me. The drums are also good, I would just maybe change the hi-hat pattern.
Here's mine. I'm also a real beginner, so any feedback is welcomed!
dolosaviour
Saviour
Not bad for your first sample flip; try adding a bassline to your production.
I think your hihats are decent & I really liked the sample; impo I would change the sound of bass/or low octave piano (only by my preference). It reminds me of a westside gunn type of beat.
not sure about those hihatsss
This is dope; when I heard the intro I thought I was about to hear TDE it's the same sample used in black lip bastard, it's a ill track if you haven't heard it!
This is a good start but two things I recommend try adding some percussion to carry your drum pattern & turn your bass down a little bit.
Vibes!
This is decent for a beginner esp. in terms of your arrangement; keep grafting!
StephanieSu01
Newbie
Hi! We can all return and study the basics of piano chords! https://musicadvisor.com/top-10-piano-chords/
In that way we are advance in composing and combine all the piano chords.
In that way we are advance in composing and combine all the piano chords.
BeatMaker80
RB Productions
Battle Points: 17
@dolosaviour appreciate you, and no I haven't heard the track till now, it is a banger. I normally don't deal with samples for that reason, but this beat was a request from a friend, he wanted something to make a song for his daughter, so he gave me that song, but thanks again on the comment ✌Not bad for your first sample flip; try adding a bassline to your production.
I think your hihats are decent & I really liked the sample; impo I would change the sound of bass/or low octave piano (only by my preference). It reminds me of a westside gunn type of beat.
This is dope; when I heard the intro I thought I was about to hear TDE it's the same sample used in black lip bastard, it's a ill track if you haven't heard it!
This is a good start but two things I recommend try adding some percussion to carry your drum pattern & turn your bass down a little bit.
Vibes!
This is decent for a beginner esp. in terms of your arrangement; keep grafting!
ChuckWillYums
Member
Battle Points: 17
THE ONLY criticism I have is about those choppy parts in the the first 00:33 seconds. Other than that, this is HOT FIYAAAAHHH like Dy’lan!!!!!
drex
superpimp trillionaire
Battle Points: 11
first joint
I was really diggin this. idk how Arvin aint catch the rhythm, I was nodding my head with this before the snare came in. you have a sick conceptual ear. I'd like to hear more of your work.
drex
superpimp trillionaire
Battle Points: 11
the sounds sound clean and they work together well imo, but I feel like it might be a little slow. the pacing just seems to plod along... idk what could change that. it's pretty good and might be perfect for w/e project it's intended for, I might like it a lot more with a vocalist on it.this reminds me of scott storch, but im not sure if it's dope enough, my bro put the flute on the verses, he also changed the kick pattern in some parts of the verse. how good is this ? what does it need ?
btw i dont know why, but this reminds me of the life of pablo.
drex
superpimp trillionaire
Battle Points: 11
sorry plays like a casio preset. do something to add more life, more transients and some kind of action, the only drama is that scale walk on the mild synth sound. needs more caffeine
drex
superpimp trillionaire
Battle Points: 11
this is a challenge. it swings harder than a lost planet, every once in a while the beat swings around to a bridge and kinda lines up, then orbits off. but it's still kinda ill. if I was gonna rhyme on it tho I'd need a swift engineer to work the fades and mutes. heavy
drex
superpimp trillionaire
Battle Points: 11
@toryhooks I really like the melody. I would maybe change up the kick pattern once in a while
@HVYW8 I really like the sample and how you used it. The hi-hats are a little quiet, I would say. The drums sound a little off-beat or something, but maybe that's just me
@Ways I really like the melody and the vibe it gives me. The drums are also good, I would just maybe change the hi-hat pattern.
Here's mine. I'm also a real beginner, so any feedback is welcomed!
good theme. I'd give the plucks a little break maybe a little bow on the strings. tells a good story.
drex
superpimp trillionaire
Battle Points: 11
one of my favorite elements is the roughness
BeatMaker80
RB Productions
Battle Points: 17
Appreciate you, not everyone's going to feel you, but there entitled to there opinionThanks again homie✌
BeatMaker80
RB Productions
Battle Points: 17
Nice, love the drums, the mix sounds good too, it has kind of an EDM feel to me, nice work homie ✌
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