Showcase - June 20-26, 2016 (post your beats in here)

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anarchos

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@S3oulC1ty Agree with riff, nice soulful vibe, with a little sprinkle of jazz on top, would choose some more jazzy drums imo.

@producedbyRiff Heavy beat, good work on the vocal sample and drums

Here are some tracks i made yesterday, was really in the zone, been for a couple of days and when i'm in the zone i go full autism, so i get alot of shit done:

Trap:







Chill Hop:

 

Spuntastic

cinephile/beatmaker
Battle Points: 82
@S3oulC1ty dope! especially the bassline. nothing to complain about, that's fire
@producedbyRiff good mix. needs a MC spitting over it tho
@anarchos i'm feeling like your tracks could use a bit compression. the balance between sample/midi and your drums feels off. sometimes the drums are a bit too low, sometimes a bit too loud. might be intended tho. if that's the case forget what I just said

 

Charles

Newbie
@S3oulC1ty Very nicely mixed there is a lot going on in this beat but it all works really well, which is why i really applaud your mix here!

@producedbyRiff like the vocal samples. The actual beat needs some melody to it. the drum work is cool, the hats seem a little out of place maybe filter them as well like you did with the rest of the drums.

@anarchos listened to the first beat. I like the kick but the lead is very generic and gets repetitive fast, try and modulate/manipulate these synth leads to make them more interesting.

@Spuntastic absolutely love this beat. the eerie lofi element really makes it for me. the drums are kind of lo-fi and gritty which i dont usually like but i love it on this beat. seriously well done!

@Kevlar070 didnt care too much for the intro but the 808 was quite cool and when it came in the song started to make more sense. Good work


here is my track
 

Knavar

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I just joined today and I'm gonna compete in the upcoming battle. Here's a sample if like me you like to scout the competition. Sorry about the audio tail, was being lazy lol.
 
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Hi all, I'd appreciate some feedback on my latest beat

@Knavar The last minute of the song is the best part :):)
Just kidding. I like it man, great drum work. I think the chords could sit a bit further back in the mix maybe other than that I like it!
@Charles Nice and chill, I like it. The bass seems a bit weak to me though in the low end, maybe add a sub beneath it and a bit of distortion.
@S3oulC1ty Old school! Love it very soulful.
 
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Rylan

good grieve
@Charles I love the vibe on this track, very mellow and I like the echo effect on it.
@SlasnerBeats I like the way it sounds, if it were my track I'd up the bass a bit, but nice one!

My Track, tried to go for the Lil Yachty x Playboi Carti type style, like I usually do
 

Nahshon Beasley

Beatmaker
Battle Points: 6


Been a while since I put anything in the showcase forum. This is dedicated to the legendary Teddy Pendergrass. May you R.I.P. soul brother.

#bringbackthesoul

Yo I like Ya Style, Love The Use Of The TP Vocal Sample, #RealSmooth #RealSoulful Keep Doin' Ya Thing :) and The Drums Were Nice 2 #Sr8Knockin
 

Nahshon Beasley

Beatmaker
Battle Points: 6

Nahshon Beasley

Beatmaker
Battle Points: 6
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Hi all, I'd appreciate some feedback on my latest beat

@Knavar The last minute of the song is the best part :):)
Just kidding. I like it man, great drum work. I think the chords could sit a bit further back in the mix maybe other than that I like it!
@Charles Nice and chill, I like it. The bass seems a bit weak to me though in the low end, maybe add a sub beneath it and a bit of distortion.
@S3oulC1ty Old school! Love it very soulful.

Ok The Beat Iz Dope, No Question... However, Kick Drums Could've Been UpFront A little More and The Vocal Sample Was Ok... Love Pitched Down FX Though, Has That Chopped And Screwed Vibe...Nice (*In My Fabolous Voice*) The Vibe Of the Beat Is Nice 2... Keep Working and Never Stop Trying 2 Get Better...
 

Nahshon Beasley

Beatmaker
Battle Points: 6
@S3oulC1ty Beat sounds tight. Put that on a project or somtin.
@producedbyRiff Sounds tight I dig the high hats, kept it simple not cluttered, sounds professional.
@anarchos I Dig your abstract beat creation sounds dope and interesting.
@Spuntastic Man, that voice sample there compliments that whole vibe. Good combination to create the vibe concept.


Nice One, Love The Weirdly Trippy Vibes, Keep It Up :)
 

Nahshon Beasley

Beatmaker
Battle Points: 6
I just joined today and I'm gonna compete in the upcoming battle. Here's a sample if like me you like to scout the competition. Sorry about the audio tail, was being lazy lol.

I just joined today and I'm gonna compete in the upcoming battle. Here's a sample if like me you like to scout the competition. Sorry about the audio tail, was being lazy lol.

Ya Beat Is Dope I Like It, One Critique Though, Main Melody In The Hook Is A Lil Loud, Keeping Working On It :) ... I Feel The Reasonable Doubt Vibes Mixed n w/ Some Modern Day Synth Action #RealDope
 

Spuntastic

cinephile/beatmaker
Battle Points: 82
@Kevlar070 that beat's vibing. bassline is smooth and I like that high pitched sounds supporting the melody. sounds like a lyre or harp
@Charles chillz. but unlike slashner I think the bass is too heavy. Had to turn the volume down almost 50% because it hurts my ears. The subbass idea isnt bad tho, maybe bring the bass down a bit and add a running subbass layer. nevertheless the beat is pretty mellow
 
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