@DEEZ BEATZ on "Never Going To Be Broke" i liked the intro , the drums and the vibe of the beat , but if i was the producer of this beat , i would change 4 things , first i would remove the trappish chant on 1:00 , so the listeners ear can take a rest , and after a while put the chant back in the beat , and then i would add a rememberable ( its a word right ? ) melody for the choruses , and also let that melody be in some parts of the verses , but in a low volume , with a whistle or something , maybe put some parts of it in verse , and beside these , i would change the bass , i didnt like the bass , the notes that it played was good , but it sounded distorted you know ? I would change that .
Your other beat was perfect , i really love it , i mean i can imagine its the instrumental of a dope track ( that gunshot sounded a bit stupid to me though , sorry
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@dot. Niiiiiice , i really liked the vocals , the vibe was Awesome , i'm serious about the vibe , its really Awesome , but if i was you , i would add some new things to it , like change the piano to a synth or something , but same melody , or add a instrument like a violin or somethin like that to play the "she neva gonna dance with me ye" melody after the chorus , so the song will have a moment after the chorus which connects it to the verse you know ? And i would change some parts of the lyrics too , like "i wanna hold you in my arms"
So in a complete view , i realize what the only bad thing about it is the fact that these type of songs are kinda , cliche now you know ? If you give it some little changes it can be a really really good song , cuz it has a good structre
@dBtheProducer Daaaaamn your beat is Dope as Hell , really liked it , if i was the producer of this beat , i would try to decrease the sound of that pad-type sound , bothers a bit , then i would add a piano , and play a low note on 1:07 and some parts like that , i would also add another piano to play it on high octaves , for 1:20 and other parts like that .
@shocro Sorry , i never felt connected with this genre , i mean it makes my ears throw up , its not your fault , even if an EDM song be the best EDM of all time and bethoven come back from death and say "this is good music" , i wont listen to it
@A.R.dasupastar i'm not sure if rythm is a good beat , i mean if i like one thing on this beat its the drums and the reverb on em , the melody that goes solo from 0:38 is good too , but the other sound that comes on it isnt tuned and it makes me punch myself when i hear it , still it cam be a good beat though . Did you try it with lower tempo ?
Your other beat was perfect , i really love it , i mean i can imagine its the instrumental of a dope track ( that gunshot sounded a bit stupid to me though , sorry
)@dot. Niiiiiice , i really liked the vocals , the vibe was Awesome , i'm serious about the vibe , its really Awesome , but if i was you , i would add some new things to it , like change the piano to a synth or something , but same melody , or add a instrument like a violin or somethin like that to play the "she neva gonna dance with me ye" melody after the chorus , so the song will have a moment after the chorus which connects it to the verse you know ? And i would change some parts of the lyrics too , like "i wanna hold you in my arms"
So in a complete view , i realize what the only bad thing about it is the fact that these type of songs are kinda , cliche now you know ? If you give it some little changes it can be a really really good song , cuz it has a good structre
@dBtheProducer Daaaaamn your beat is Dope as Hell , really liked it , if i was the producer of this beat , i would try to decrease the sound of that pad-type sound , bothers a bit , then i would add a piano , and play a low note on 1:07 and some parts like that , i would also add another piano to play it on high octaves , for 1:20 and other parts like that .
@shocro Sorry , i never felt connected with this genre , i mean it makes my ears throw up , its not your fault , even if an EDM song be the best EDM of all time and bethoven come back from death and say "this is good music" , i wont listen to it
@A.R.dasupastar i'm not sure if rythm is a good beat , i mean if i like one thing on this beat its the drums and the reverb on em , the melody that goes solo from 0:38 is good too , but the other sound that comes on it isnt tuned and it makes me punch myself when i hear it , still it cam be a good beat though . Did you try it with lower tempo ?
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