Showcase - June 1-7, 2020

[Crispifier]

@Primz

good effort! my only problem is the panning of the hats i think its a little much and maybe their a tad loud ? feel like they take away from the rest of the beat. I digg everything else though ! the melody was really cool and also that weird squelchey sound was fckin awesome fix the hats and this could really be something if you developed it into a full 3-4min track

 

[Primz]

@Primz

good effort! my only problem is the panning of the hats i think its a little much and maybe their a tad loud ? feel like they take away from the rest of the beat. I digg everything else though ! the melody was really cool and also that weird squelchey sound was fckin awesome fix the hats and this could really be something if you developed it into a full 3-4min track

Thank man, never done a hybrid trap thing. I also felt the hats were too much.. Litetslly room my 30 mins to do that 0 mastering.

 

[jihun9554]

Here's my new beat !!

 

[jihun9554]

Here is mine.

The rhythm of this beat is very interesting. I really love the drum loops!!

 

[Mahlhavoc]

@2GooD Productions

Thanks man, I will mess with it a bit in regard to your input.

You said, "I would have done something more obvious with the sample at the start personally as it suits trap " and I am not sure what you mean. What sample?

 

[2GooD Productions]

@2GooD Productions

Thanks man, I will mess with it a bit in regard to your input.

You said, "I would have done something more obvious with the sample at the start personally as it suits trap " and I am not sure what you mean. What sample?

the orchestral intro

 

[Mahlhavoc]

the orchestral intro

Oh, I made that, it isnt a sample, but I am changing it around now though. Thats the BBC broman, and thank you for turning us all on to it! +10

 

[2GooD Productions]

Oh, I made that, it isnt a sample, but I am changing it around now though. Thats the BBC broman, and thank you for turning us all on to it! +10

I only got around to ordering mine the other day hahahahaha I was convinced that was a sample, that sounds really good

 

[Mahlhavoc]

I only got around to ordering mine the other day hahahahaha I was convinced that was a sample, that sounds really good

Now that makes a newb feel all fuzzy inside :biggrin:

 

[Mahlhavoc]

Heres where I am at now @2GooD Productions I tried to tone down and bring a decent transition and put in piano, unsure if it works or not.

Nothing here yet.

 

[Crispifier]

Heres where I am at now @2GooD Productions I tried to tone down and bring a decent transition and put in piano, unsure if it works or not.

Nothing here yet.

man know you were talking to @2GooD Productions but gotta say that orchestral stuff you made at the start is amazingly composed

 

[Mahlhavoc]

man know you were talking to @2GooD Productions but gotta say that orchestral stuff you made at the start is amazingly composed

thank you very much man, you know, I am sure, how good it feels to hear this especially when ya have those days/weeks when you second guess any skill you might have or lack there of. This is much appreciated! Still need those "Well that was horrible!" comments to keep us straight, but its nice when things roll well.

 

[2GooD Productions]

Heres where I am at now @2GooD Productions I tried to tone down and bring a decent transition and put in piano, unsure if it works or not.

Nothing here yet.

I think it sounds a lot better now

 

[Iron Keys]

@Crispifier On listening, I think you should work on sound selection, you are very good at layering and composing melodies, the only problem with this particular track IMO is sound selection, the sounds just dont suit this genre or at least the acapella..

@Crispifier word for word my thoughts too.