Showcase - July 25-31, 2016
- Thread starter Fade
- Start date
-
warzone (nov 5-9) signup begins in...
- Status
River Cruz
Member
Battle Points: 6
@S3oulC1ty The chops are absolutely incredibleeeeee!! The bass threw me off at first cus at times it sounds off key but after listening to it a few times it started hitting. The drums are KNOCKING. You have a mix of hats and tambs and that shit is workingggg. The laugh towards the middle was just the icing on the cake lol. I hear Jada all over this. Overall great stuff bro.
Charles
Newbie
@S3oulC1ty The beat is nice i feel like both the hats and bass are quite unnecessary at times. Not that they shouldn't be in the beat but at certain points they make the beat sound awkward
@River Cruz I really love that sample. the drums fit very nicely. The vocal chop is nice as well. I think adding a synth to provide some more melody would take this track to the next level
@River Cruz I really love that sample. the drums fit very nicely. The vocal chop is nice as well. I think adding a synth to provide some more melody would take this track to the next level
TheRealAGE
Newbie
@S3oulC1ty i like the sample. I like the vibe. But that snare has to be better. It sits weird in the mix in my opinion. I can see the sound your going for with it but its not quite there. The tamb is bit to loud as well. I like the potential this has.
@River Cruz dope sample. Drums are bit generic tho. You need some dusty boom bap drums on this. They should be louder as well. This could use a dope bassline as well. Keep grindin'
@Charles this is dope. I like the drums. Bassline is dope. The beat sounds a bit empty. But if a rapper gets on this it would sound full I think. I like how the sample is filtering throughout over the regular sample. The drum mix could use a bit of work but overall its a good beat.
Here is track I rapped on and produced. Dropped today for my birthday!
@River Cruz dope sample. Drums are bit generic tho. You need some dusty boom bap drums on this. They should be louder as well. This could use a dope bassline as well. Keep grindin'
@Charles this is dope. I like the drums. Bassline is dope. The beat sounds a bit empty. But if a rapper gets on this it would sound full I think. I like how the sample is filtering throughout over the regular sample. The drum mix could use a bit of work but overall its a good beat.
Here is track I rapped on and produced. Dropped today for my birthday!
John Looney
Newbie
John Looney
Newbie
@S3oulC1ty i like the sample. I like the vibe. But that snare has to be better. It sits weird in the mix in my opinion. I can see the sound your going for with it but its not quite there. The tamb is bit to loud as well. I like the potential this has.
@River Cruz dope sample. Drums are bit generic tho. You need some dusty boom bap drums on this. They should be louder as well. This could use a dope bassline as well. Keep grindin'
@Charles this is dope. I like the drums. Bassline is dope. The beat sounds a bit empty. But if a rapper gets on this it would sound full I think. I like how the sample is filtering throughout over the regular sample. The drum mix could use a bit of work but overall its a good beat.
Here is track I rapped on and produced. Dropped today for my birthday!
dope. you doin you, good.
@TheRealAGE Yo man this is absolutely dope! Dope Bars and fresh recording. Feeling this join! Happy birthday
@Charles Nice mellow style, it's a bit empty like Real age says but it fits perfectly
@River Cruz I love that sample, and this biggie speech is the glue. Dope Joint!
@S3oulC1ty This bassline is on point. But the hats should be on another position. Do you think Diana died? I heard it was all a rumor.
@Charles Nice mellow style, it's a bit empty like Real age says but it fits perfectly
@River Cruz I love that sample, and this biggie speech is the glue. Dope Joint!
@S3oulC1ty This bassline is on point. But the hats should be on another position. Do you think Diana died? I heard it was all a rumor.
L
LevelMusic
Guest
@Dob Liked the flute sound. Very soulful, but I'd give it a touch of delay/reverb and make it more upfront. Also giving the beat a second part was a nice idea
@John Looney Very nice guitar sample, had a feeling that the vox mess up with it a bit. Drums are banging nicely, love the sound with those trap hi hat chops
@TheRealAGE Love the sound, mixed nicely and clean. The drake/future jumpman reference is doubtful IMO
@John Looney Very nice guitar sample, had a feeling that the vox mess up with it a bit. Drums are banging nicely, love the sound with those trap hi hat chops
@TheRealAGE Love the sound, mixed nicely and clean. The drake/future jumpman reference is doubtful IMO
Dan Miles
Newbie
@TheRealAGE love the production and the vocals great track altogether keep doing your thing!
@John Looney a great sample chop up with the trap drums bouncing along nicely!
@John Looney a great sample chop up with the trap drums bouncing along nicely!
Krass1
Member
Battle Points: 13
@Dan Miles beat is dope ,really well mixed and I'm lovin sample with the modern style drums
Top job keep up the good work
Top job keep up the good work
that sample is heavenly man...really like how the track seems to modulate in volume almost like it has its own pulse or something.Ill comment later on the lower end since i can't hear it now on my lap top
dBtheProducer
Autism Dad, I Use FL Studio
Battle Points: 89
<iframe width="100%" height="450" scrolling="no" frameborder="no" src=""></iframe>
- Status