RizzakBeats
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 1
Hey @Hotfudge , nice to have you here I like the mood of the beat. It fits quite good to the title. I would eq the synth strings in the hook a little bit so they will be smoother. They are to harsh somehow (0:55 for example). To Get a nice lofi feeling you could also put a filter on the clap so it sounds like in the break at 1:23.
What i don't like is the pattern of the kick, at the end of the bar you hear the kick sound very kick two times (0:57)
Also what takes a little bit of quality from the beat is the plucked/bell-Synth. It plays the first note on the beat 1, the next notes are a little bit off beat. I know it's on purpose, but the melody, which is playing downwards (1:05) should be on the beat. On 1:25 you made the melody on beat and it sounds super!
This is all my opinion, hope it helps
What i don't like is the pattern of the kick, at the end of the bar you hear the kick sound very kick two times (0:57)
Also what takes a little bit of quality from the beat is the plucked/bell-Synth. It plays the first note on the beat 1, the next notes are a little bit off beat. I know it's on purpose, but the melody, which is playing downwards (1:05) should be on the beat. On 1:25 you made the melody on beat and it sounds super!
This is all my opinion, hope it helps