@Illa M "The Wall". mixing can definitely be improved, some parts sound too loud, like that rim/shaker thing at the end of the bar i think. The bassline is also kinda out of place, it sounds quite high-pitched. I like some of the transitions in the beat though, when it suddenly stops and switches into other section
@stcbeats very unusual beat, interesting groove. I like the pad in the background in particular. THe only thing that in my opinion can be done is panning drums more to the left/right, for separation, they all kinda central now - hi hats, everything. Also hi hats can be made more quiet, they start to irritate ears after some time listening.
Here is my beat: