This is a track I did then freestyled on to create... I'm going to start writing again but send me some pointers (I'm not Jay-z lol)
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@jafar4000 - (Irish) grimey track, gives me RZA energy... make me want to watch Akira lol...I like your use of textures, It gives the track a lot of character... the part when the bass switches up is dope too... nice job on this
(confidence Man) - this one gives me the energy of MF DOOM R.I.P (insert MJ cryface)... I like your style... it's raw hip hop... good job.. find some dope emcees for them joints yo! It will bring it full circle
@The Thrillz - nice clean mix, this is most defiantly a Weeknd record, I really like the melodies and how they form a harmony... I can ride to this on the interstate...I love it!
@stcbeats - super bass! this give me a RnB female singer vibe... I would like to hear one more instrument on the track to take it to a higher place if that makes sense... good foundation track for a writer
@Rah.sool - love the panning in the beginning of the track... snare is sat in the mix perfect, the arrangement keeps me involved, and the the melody and harmonies are excellent too... I would like to hear a J.cole or Nas rap on this... nice work
@beatsbytmj - very elegant and dramatic... this defiantly a backpack hip hop track, something Mos Def could rock out on...the chops are clean... post it when you're friend spit on that joint, I wanna hear how it turns out
@44Beatzz - this give me trech (Naughty by nature) vibes... I like the lofi sound and the vocals on the track (gives me an Idea of what you as the producer were thinking)... I miss when tracks were about a vibe like this... good job yo
@Hypermanbeatz - Mix sounds good... this giving me tech9 vibes...reverbs are super clean and I like the ping pong delays, it gives the track a lot of space... I would like to hear one more instrument or maybe a layering of an existing sound but good usable beat either way