I like what you've gone for here its not typically my style but i do respect what you've made, i like the use of 'choir' sound when it comes in about a 45seconds in. The track itself sounds well mixed and the drums sit well which is something i usually have trouble with myself.
Here something i made a few days back and thought id just give it a rough mix and master and bounce it out, was going for the old 90's feel, sunny day sorta thing....