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Sole Element

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@P300Beats nice arrangement and great sounds. Sounds real clean.
@DEEZ BEATZ getting loud was a good beat and I like the screwed voice.
@Toni P In being honest I felt like the beat could use more energy, its good you kept it simple but just seems basic. But not bad at all keep it up.
 

TungaTroll

Member
Battle Points: 11
Hi, I'm new, posting a beat to get some feedback. Who should I give feedback to?

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NathAudio

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Hi, I'm new, posting a beat to get some feedback. Who should I give feedback to?

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Really liking the groove and the sounds are distinct, but I think it could do with something to switch it up a little to keep you hooked.

I know still needs work, especially if I'm gonna work with a vocalist on this one, but I'm eager to get it in front of peoples ears and get feedback on it.

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Really liking the groove and the sounds are distinct, but I think it could do with something to switch it up a little to keep you hooked.

I know still needs work, especially if I'm gonna work with a vocalist on this one, but I'm eager to get it in front of peoples ears and get feedback on it.

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@NathAudio , catchy beat but try and work on your timing with your bass drum...I know your trying to roll and tune your bass but it's not tight and timing is off..but it's a great concept just needs a little work
 

NathAudio

Newbie
@NathAudio , catchy beat but try and work on your timing with your bass drum...I know your trying to roll and tune your bass but it's not tight and timing is off..but it's a great concept just needs a little work
Still not 100% with the rules so I'm not sure if this counts as spam, but thanks for the quick feedback man, It's much appreciated.

EDIT:
Seeing as it was a pretty easy change to make, I've reuploaded the track with the tighter timing in the bass and kick, just so that if I get any other feedback no-one's gonna be distracted by the timing.
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Still not 100% with the rules so I'm not sure if this counts as spam, but thanks for the quick feedback man, It's much appreciated.
No this isn't spam... that's what this forum is for. Spam is when you are putting up prices of beats you have for sale... especially when this site is for beatmakers.
 
@EuloGeeBeats
Very much dig the energy of the beat, and the dirty vibe it has.
I would have preferred the main melody to be a bit distorted as well. It sounds too clean for me.
Personal preference though!
I subscribed as well!

@Matt-D
Something doesn't really gel for me.
The beat by itself its nice, but I don't think its the right one for the vocals.
If I'm judging just the beat, I would say my only point of criticism is that its a bit busy.
You could leave some space open for vocals.

@DEEZ BEATZ
Listenend to Phycosis. Vibe is nice and grimey, drums go hard. What drum kit are you using?
This is dope!

@P300Beats
Very erie vibe! Some of sounds slide in and out of tune, which is great feature to keep the listener interested.
Drums knock nice and hard. Good stuff! *Subbed

@TeiMoney Beats
The main melody instrument is very generic, but man, those sounds you went for around that are dope AF!
Really intriguing sound design/selection. What are you using as VSTi for these sounds?
Subbed!

Thank you bro i appreciate it also subbed, for this beat i mostly used electra x for the main melody & the hook, and the rest is omnisphere...
 

Rodas

I don't even know
Battle Points: 43
@NathAudio
I think the percussion sound (sounds like a clav) is a bit too loud and due to that, a bit annoying. The kick also needs some work done maybe layer a "fatter" kick underneath just to get it popping out a bit more. Regarding what DEEZ said about the bass, it's a bit off, i didn't hear the previous version so i don't know how it compares. I'm also not a fan of the snare panning, it sounds too far to the right. Otherwise, it's a nice melody and the ideas are there, you just need to work better on the execution. Keep on working man :)

Since I didn't get far in the contest, i'll post this one here :)

 
Still not 100% with the rules so I'm not sure if this counts as spam, but thanks for the quick feedback man, It's much appreciated.

EDIT:
Seeing as it was a pretty easy change to make, I've reuploaded the track with the tighter timing in the bass and kick, just so that if I get any other feedback no-one's gonna be distracted by the timing.
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@NathAudio , much much better sound...now just bring the woodblock fx and the reverb clap down a little cause it is a little overbearing..but this is much better than the original..GREAT WORK !!!!!
 

EuloGeeBeats

Veteran.
Hey, I really like the way you put some voice in the beat keep it going
Thanks mate. I like the vocoder, my new toy.

Your beats cool, either needs another layer or two or to be sped up a bit. I would get some gongs or other percussion in there, maybe a subtle appregiator to fill up and drive it along.

Nothing wrong with it, keep at it !

Peace.
 

EuloGeeBeats

Veteran.
Gonna go through as much of you guys beats as possible, and here is my submission.
Would love it if some of you would subscribe :)



Thanks for listening, i removed the synth after, it bugged me. Sounds better without, great minds think alike.

Turorials are a good idea man, people wanna know how. The beat sounds nice and i like the sounds you chose. Hope you get 50 mill. Dont settle for less.

You can hear new version of my beat on SounCloud or YouTube.

Peace.
 

EuloGeeBeats

Veteran.
@NathAudio
I think the percussion sound (sounds like a clav) is a bit too loud and due to that, a bit annoying. The kick also needs some work done maybe layer a "fatter" kick underneath just to get it popping out a bit more. Regarding what DEEZ said about the bass, it's a bit off, i didn't hear the previous version so i don't know how it compares. I'm also not a fan of the snare panning, it sounds too far to the right. Otherwise, it's a nice melody and the ideas are there, you just need to work better on the execution. Keep on working man :)

Since I didn't get far in the contest, i'll post this one here :)



Sounds proffesional mate, nice work. Maybe some drum variations or fills / rolls. ?

Quality beat.

Peace.
 
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