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Marc Duncan
The Black Man
Battle Points: 3
JAySAgE
Newbie
Digging the melody, like how you switched it up and brought it back give it a different feel.. Bass at some parts sounds like it might have been a little too muddy.. But I rock with it, overall sounds good
dBtheProducer
Autism Dad, I Use FL Studio
Battle Points: 89
whats up, its a cold day in Virginia today, im at work and im not supposed to be on the computer but FUCK IT! slow asf in here so i need to check out some beats...
@Marc Duncan very nice job on this beat, i noticed all the details in everyone of your change ups...i like that alot you having me sittting here guessing lol...i can see a trap artist on this for sure with some auto tune type shit...good work
@JAySAgE first time hearing your work bro...nice to meet ya...as simple as the melody is there alot of lyrical room in this beat...im digging the direction you took with the drums definately different from what ive been hearing lately...really simple beat but i like it it gets my head to nod and a real mellow lyrical mc would crush this...i even like the instruments you used bro good job!
heres my beat, thanks!
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@Marc Duncan very nice job on this beat, i noticed all the details in everyone of your change ups...i like that alot you having me sittting here guessing lol...i can see a trap artist on this for sure with some auto tune type shit...good work
@JAySAgE first time hearing your work bro...nice to meet ya...as simple as the melody is there alot of lyrical room in this beat...im digging the direction you took with the drums definately different from what ive been hearing lately...really simple beat but i like it it gets my head to nod and a real mellow lyrical mc would crush this...i even like the instruments you used bro good job!
heres my beat, thanks!
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NONONSENSEBEATS
NononsenseBeats
@Marc Duncan I'm digging all the tones u got in there. Like the change ups. Drums are a little to wild for me but it works. Nice job overall.
@JAySAgE Welcome to the site. I dig the feel of the beat. I like the drums. I would maybe layer the pad that comes in (or whatever that is) with a string or something. The main tone is just a little repetitive. Not bad at all tho. Nice job.
@dBtheProducer Yo that sample is dope. Bass may be a little heavy. I like the drum and the effects. That hi hat is nice but really strong. Like it tho. Good work.
Here is mine.
@JAySAgE Welcome to the site. I dig the feel of the beat. I like the drums. I would maybe layer the pad that comes in (or whatever that is) with a string or something. The main tone is just a little repetitive. Not bad at all tho. Nice job.
@dBtheProducer Yo that sample is dope. Bass may be a little heavy. I like the drum and the effects. That hi hat is nice but really strong. Like it tho. Good work.
Here is mine.
DEEZ BEATZ
Banned
DROPPIN ANOTHER BEAT ON Y'ALL.....
Nothing here yet.
DEEZ BEATZ
Banned
@Marc Duncan , THIS IS A VERY BUSY BEAT....DOPE MELODY
@NONONSENSEBEATS , PARTICLES WAS OK, BUT A LITTLE BORING..AND BACK TO THE ROOTS IS VERY GOOD..LOVE THE DRUMS AND THE SAMPLES...GREAT WORK
@JAySAgE , YOUR BEAT IS OK,, BUT IT'S MISSING SOMETHING. IT HAS NO DIRECTION..YOUR MUSIC HAS TO HAVE A PURPOSE...NOT FEELING IT
@dBtheProducer ..I LIKE THIS BRUH....VERY SLICK
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@Marc Duncan I like the track. I like how you switch it up..
@JAySAgE I like the drums but something is missing in this track...repetitive maybe????
@dBtheProducer welcome back mang...that was a dope ass sample. The drums are sauce, the bass is kinda loud but other than that....good job!!
@NONONSENSEBEATS I like the second track better, the drums makes it 1000 times better
@DEEZ BEATZ The horns and the FX was dope. The bass is on point also. It kinda reminds me some Three 6 mafia...dopeness
I just redid this beat today. I'm going through all my old beats and see whats need to be "updated"...
@JAySAgE I like the drums but something is missing in this track...repetitive maybe????
@dBtheProducer welcome back mang...that was a dope ass sample. The drums are sauce, the bass is kinda loud but other than that....good job!!
@NONONSENSEBEATS I like the second track better, the drums makes it 1000 times better
@DEEZ BEATZ The horns and the FX was dope. The bass is on point also. It kinda reminds me some Three 6 mafia...dopeness
I just redid this beat today. I'm going through all my old beats and see whats need to be "updated"...
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DEEZ BEATZ
Banned
@Klypse , hey bruh this groove is so tight...and the beat is so fvkin dope...and you said the bass was too loud? the bass isn't too loud, but the music and sample loop needs to come to the front of the track....te drumbeat is on point to me....but that's it...other than that i think it's really dope...and thanks for the feedback
Sole Element
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 1
@JAySAgE I like this way to keep it simple and the melody is kind of catchy nice work!!
@dBtheProducer what's good I see your back on the scene. This beat gets me in the mood to bust out some rhymes and get hyped. Good, fun beat!!
@NONONSENSEBEATS Didn't really feel the first one that much, but the second one is a good mellowed out beat and real easy on the ears good stuff.
@DEEZ BEATZ dope!! I love those vocals you added to the beat as well nice touch.
@Klypse Nice touch bro!! the only thing I would do is turn the sample up some more but other than that the beat is solid.
@thizzbeatz great arrangement and mixing!! I like this one because of the melody and great drum choice.
@dBtheProducer what's good I see your back on the scene. This beat gets me in the mood to bust out some rhymes and get hyped. Good, fun beat!!
@NONONSENSEBEATS Didn't really feel the first one that much, but the second one is a good mellowed out beat and real easy on the ears good stuff.
@DEEZ BEATZ dope!! I love those vocals you added to the beat as well nice touch.
@Klypse Nice touch bro!! the only thing I would do is turn the sample up some more but other than that the beat is solid.
@thizzbeatz great arrangement and mixing!! I like this one because of the melody and great drum choice.
Marc Duncan
The Black Man
Battle Points: 3
Dark trap beats are the greatest. I would've make the 808s louder but otherwise sick beat.
Sole Element
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 1
oh and here is me making the beat above in my lab. personally i like seeing producers work live so i figured id post this enjoy brothers.
@Klypse that snare jeeeeesus 
. i also like the work you did with the sample . only thing i could point out is that reversed sound (?) at around 0:33, which is too loud, other than that nice job
@Matt-D i'm not feeling the hook too much, also the drums on the sample are really popping out. the voice also gets a bit hard on the ears after a point, maybe turn the high frequencies on that one a bit down. nonetheless i like where you're going with this, just needs some tweaks
here's mine, still a bit unsure about the mix, but some outside feedback may be just what i need
. i also like the work you did with the sample . only thing i could point out is that reversed sound (?) at around 0:33, which is too loud, other than that nice job @Matt-D i'm not feeling the hook too much, also the drums on the sample are really popping out. the voice also gets a bit hard on the ears after a point, maybe turn the high frequencies on that one a bit down. nonetheless i like where you're going with this, just needs some tweaks
here's mine, still a bit unsure about the mix, but some outside feedback may be just what i need
@Rodas Damn this flip this dope, it has the slum village feel to it. I like the vocals, the drums are on point and the arrangement of them. The melody is smooth. The bass sounds a little muddy but other than that....this is sauce!!! Good job...
@Matt-D Good choice and melody of the sample, I like the used of vocals but the only thing is thrown me off is the drums. I like the drum pattern but it needs better mixing. Once it gets better mixing than this flip ain't nothing to F**k with...
@Matt-D Good choice and melody of the sample, I like the used of vocals but the only thing is thrown me off is the drums. I like the drum pattern but it needs better mixing. Once it gets better mixing than this flip ain't nothing to F**k with...
DEEZ BEATZ
Banned
@Klypse that snare jeeeeesus
@Matt-D i'm not feeling the hook too much, also the drums on the sample are really popping out. the voice also gets a bit hard on the ears after a point, maybe turn the high frequencies on that one a bit down. nonetheless i like where you're going with this, just needs some tweaks
here's mine, still a bit unsure about the mix, but some outside feedback may be just what i need
@Rodas, this beat is dope bruh, real smooth. now i understand that a few people think that your mix needs tweeking, but it depends on if they are listening on their phone or pc. i'm listening on my pc and it sounds good...i really like it cause you are trying something new and you are looking for your own style
@Klypse @DEEZ BEATZ i tried it on my car stereo on the way to college, the experience was not pleasant at all, gotta tweak that low end asap. thank you both for the kind words
DEEZ BEATZ
Banned
@Rodas , yeah I just played it on the big speakers and oooh were, there is some things that need tweaking. But I still like the direction it's going in@Klypse @DEEZ BEATZ i tried it on my car stereo on the way to college, the experience was not pleasant at all, gotta tweak that low end asap. thank you both for the kind words
yeah me too, I had a lot of fun with this sample
. well i've got some low end cleaning to do, see y'all soon xDSole Element
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 1
thanks to everyone who provided feedback and I most definitely agree with the mixing I listened to it in my car today and noticed those drums and irritated me so I will definitely fix it and repost.
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