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scream'O

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Hello everyone. I started to make beats ~ 1 week ago and here is my "greatest" two beats. Is that good? And which mistakes i did in those 2? (And sorry for bad english - not my main language)


 

NONONSENSEBEATS

NononsenseBeats
Battle Points: 237
Hello everyone. I started to make beats ~ 1 week ago and here is my "greatest" two beats. Is that good? And which mistakes i did in those 2? (And sorry for bad english - not my main language)



They both have potential. Def not bad for a week. I like the second one better...I would say work on the layout and add change ups. Build the beat up and work on ur cuts. Hope this help and keep working/studying on it. Can't do nothing but get better
 

KDVS

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 85
@thedreampolice : wonderfull. meditation stuff. pro mixed, straight to the shop with this! Amazing vocal. Great work!

@The Monk : nice percussion, like the glitches. cool drum pattern and digg the ambient.

@anarchos : Love this start... not a big fan of these drums tho, but its a taste thing i think...

@Hadoq : That funk! Gotta love the Disco... I'm digging this... great stuff...

@Hit The Road : Yeah.. ha, digg this! So much good music on here.

Ok, here is mine. I did a version of "J Dilla - E=MC2"

 

Hadoq

Producing weird shit since 2002
@thedreampolice I review your track once more, because I've listened to it much more since
that thing is much deeper than I initially heard, loving the small "bridge" around 3 minutes.
if I had to pick one thing, maybe, the tremolo in the voice is, a few times, a little bit, just right over the top.
the way the singer goes a tad bit offkey on a few notes here and there is actually amazing and makes the thing deeper also (screw auto tune, I love kwirks and bugs like that), it's like it makes her sound more "vulnerable" in a way. Her voice is beautiful and goes perfectly with your music.

You must be damn proud of you cause this track is huge! great work man, you got lots of talent, and worked hard on your craft. where can I buy your album?

@KDVS I like the intro, the general groove is surprising and deliciously chaotic! Nothing bad to say about it, I'd like to hear more

@DeCrescendo Nice groove, great beat for the most part (not a big fan of the horns sounds, not at all), the mix is kind of weak (not listening on my monitors right now tho), great energy, you definitely got something going on here

@scream'O Hi, and welcome. it's best if you leave some comments at the same time you post your beats ;)
for a beginner, you got a few things right: the drums are nice, the sampling and chopping, I won't tell because I'm really bad at this myself, it's not quite there yet, but you'll get there over time. Good job for a beginner, but there's still a good way to go. You're on the right track, keep going!
 
I kinda dig the tones. The second tone that comes in sounds a little off tho (I am guessing it was freestyled) and needs a solid bassline. Also a smooth drum and u could definitely make this something.
Thanks man I just started learning the program like 2 days ago. I'll take all that into consideration for the changes I am going to make!
 
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