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jihun9554
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the synth sound of first one is....really dope! I think many rappers like beats that have this kind of style....really trendy!
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ILLIEN
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@2GooD Productions I could not get the first beat to play. The second beat was ok, I just didn't like the horn but other than that it was alright. I did Like that change-up at :56. The third beat I wasn't feeling, ok mix but it didn't really hit for me.
@Un4zn I like the synth but the beat doesn't have a whole lot of feeling. I think if you made the arrangement more exciting it would bring it to life IMO.
@Kod4R That first beat is dope! nice classic vibe.
@skidflow I like the simplicity of this one and the sounds you used. Very Clean. Everything sounds good from my end.
@Fantom 91 I'm curious about this one, I would like to see how it sounds with an artist. The beat is good, I just think it's one of those beats that sound better when it's a complete song. Nice! and respect for trying something new.
@Un4zn I like the synth but the beat doesn't have a whole lot of feeling. I think if you made the arrangement more exciting it would bring it to life IMO.
@Kod4R That first beat is dope! nice classic vibe.
@skidflow I like the simplicity of this one and the sounds you used. Very Clean. Everything sounds good from my end.
@Fantom 91 I'm curious about this one, I would like to see how it sounds with an artist. The beat is good, I just think it's one of those beats that sound better when it's a complete song. Nice! and respect for trying something new.
Sole Element
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 1
@jihun9554 I like what I am hearing so far, when I get a chance I will get back with you on the rest.
jihun9554
Jihun Park
I really love this track! the sound of your instrument and its arrangement are very exciting...... !! but it needs some powerful bass!
Khaly Beatz
Newbie
Battle Points: 1
Logic x NF freestyle type beat. Let me know if you think I pulled this off.
Khaly Beatz
Newbie
Battle Points: 1
I dig this! Has a dope old school vibe to.
Khaly Beatz
Newbie
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You just got your 100 subs on youtube
nice work
Kod4R
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 19
@2GooD Productions The flying guitar flip 2 is sick! You flipped it so good, the rhytm and the bass are crazy!! keep it up!
@Edgar im dont like the trap music, but "Shine" is so good, and so chill! Keep up the good work!
@skidflow that's really dope beat, it sounds like some drama movie soundtrack!
@Edgar im dont like the trap music, but "Shine" is so good, and so chill! Keep up the good work!
@skidflow that's really dope beat, it sounds like some drama movie soundtrack!
slimegreenbeats
ILLIEN
It's dope man, definitely headed in the right direction. I would add a little bit more to the melody, maybe switch it up at some point.
I really liked the hi hats.
Khaly Beatz
Newbie
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I appreciate the feedback, yeah, my melody game is a bit weak. It needs some work.
crosstevsky
beats architect
@2GooD Productions On "2nd Best"- I always listen closely for drum arrangement, and I feel that on this you can bring some fresh energy with variation in the drums at some point (like bringing in another element...loop or something) All the melodies and countermelodies here are composed good. The first melody can be dropped for a couple of bars or since is that repetitive...maybe switch it up with something not so harsh sounding element and push it in the back leaving space for the other melody or a rapper.
@Matt-D This remix is perfect, everything is well balanced in the mix...That piano is excellent, but maybe you can drop it for a couple of bars.
@Un4zn I can hear this in an action movie scene or something, it has soundtrack quality to it. That initial synth becomes a lil bit monotonous after a while, you can drop it couple bars,octave down or come up with something different. Mix sounds kind of flat to me, like you over compressed the master, you can bring down the hihat a notch. Your reverb use is good, although i think you can leave some elements drier, like your drums for example. Overall, nice experiment.
@Marc Duncan I don't what your goal is with this, but I must be honest and say I don't feel it at all. If it is just for fun, that's ok. What you can do with it is after the beat drops, go in a different direction with it, drop the habanera shit, or use smaller segments.
@Edgar Smooth beat, I really like it. Drums are on point, that snare/clap is warm. The bassline is nice, I think you can develop it more, I think you have space for something like that. I know is tough with this kind of beats, but you must have some kind of a switch up or middle section if you will...It gets a little repetitive after a while
@stcbeats That piano chops are dope. That clap can be brought down, i blink every time This has that weird, psychedelic quality that I really dig.
@Kod4R Nice classic sound on both of these, Nice jazz chops on Chill Mood. Hard is well...hard. I like it.
@jihun9554 This is interesting, it has variety of styles in it. Mixing can be improved on all of your tracks.
@skidflow Nice sounds on your beat, kind of a minimalistic approach i guess...Very relaxing. That string sound though..that can be scrapped...it doesn't fit...and 11minutes?
@Fantom 91 This can be in a movie scene that takes place somewhere in the middle east Turkey for example I like that vocal sample. Drums are very good.
@Khaly Beatz That 808 kicks ass! The rest of the drums can be more upfront.
I tried to stay away from "the trap sound" since there are so many good producers that produce trap, but I've decided i will give it a try...What do you think?
@Matt-D This remix is perfect, everything is well balanced in the mix...That piano is excellent, but maybe you can drop it for a couple of bars.
@Un4zn I can hear this in an action movie scene or something, it has soundtrack quality to it. That initial synth becomes a lil bit monotonous after a while, you can drop it couple bars,octave down or come up with something different. Mix sounds kind of flat to me, like you over compressed the master, you can bring down the hihat a notch. Your reverb use is good, although i think you can leave some elements drier, like your drums for example. Overall, nice experiment.
@Marc Duncan I don't what your goal is with this, but I must be honest and say I don't feel it at all. If it is just for fun, that's ok. What you can do with it is after the beat drops, go in a different direction with it, drop the habanera shit, or use smaller segments.
@Edgar Smooth beat, I really like it. Drums are on point, that snare/clap is warm. The bassline is nice, I think you can develop it more, I think you have space for something like that. I know is tough with this kind of beats, but you must have some kind of a switch up or middle section if you will...It gets a little repetitive after a while
@stcbeats That piano chops are dope. That clap can be brought down, i blink every time
This has that weird, psychedelic quality that I really dig.@Kod4R Nice classic sound on both of these, Nice jazz chops on Chill Mood. Hard is well...hard. I like it.
@jihun9554 This is interesting, it has variety of styles in it. Mixing can be improved on all of your tracks.
@skidflow Nice sounds on your beat, kind of a minimalistic approach i guess...Very relaxing. That string sound though..that can be scrapped...it doesn't fit...and 11minutes?
@Fantom 91 This can be in a movie scene that takes place somewhere in the middle east Turkey for example
I like that vocal sample. Drums are very good.@Khaly Beatz That 808 kicks ass! The rest of the drums can be more upfront.
I tried to stay away from "the trap sound" since there are so many good producers that produce trap, but I've decided i will give it a try...What do you think?
crosstevsky
beats architect
PS...I now see that how i went along, the comments are becoming shorter and shorter, i guess i got tired, sorry about that.
I love the dark vibes on this here. This beat goes hard...a rapper can really flex on this joint. dope work.@2GooD Productions On "2nd Best"- I always listen closely for drum arrangement, and I feel that on this you can bring some fresh energy with variation in the drums at some point (like bringing in another element...loop or something) All the melodies and countermelodies here are composed good. The first melody can be dropped for a couple of bars or since is that repetitive...maybe switch it up with something not so harsh sounding element and push it in the back leaving space for the other melody or a rapper.
@Matt-D This remix is perfect, everything is well balanced in the mix...That piano is excellent, but maybe you can drop it for a couple of bars.
@Un4zn I can hear this in an action movie scene or something, it has soundtrack quality to it. That initial synth becomes a lil bit monotonous after a while, you can drop it couple bars,octave down or come up with something different. Mix sounds kind of flat to me, like you over compressed the master, you can bring down the hihat a notch. Your reverb use is good, although i think you can leave some elements drier, like your drums for example. Overall, nice experiment.
@Marc Duncan I don't what your goal is with this, but I must be honest and say I don't feel it at all. If it is just for fun, that's ok. What you can do with it is after the beat drops, go in a different direction with it, drop the habanera shit, or use smaller segments.
@Edgar Smooth beat, I really like it. Drums are on point, that snare/clap is warm. The bassline is nice, I think you can develop it more, I think you have space for something like that. I know is tough with this kind of beats, but you must have some kind of a switch up or middle section if you will...It gets a little repetitive after a while
@stcbeats That piano chops are dope. That clap can be brought down, i blink every time
@Kod4R Nice classic sound on both of these, Nice jazz chops on Chill Mood. Hard is well...hard. I like it.
@jihun9554 This is interesting, it has variety of styles in it. Mixing can be improved on all of your tracks.
@skidflow Nice sounds on your beat, kind of a minimalistic approach i guess...Very relaxing. That string sound though..that can be scrapped...it doesn't fit...and 11minutes?
@Fantom 91 This can be in a movie scene that takes place somewhere in the middle east Turkey for example
@Khaly Beatz That 808 kicks ass! The rest of the drums can be more upfront.
I tried to stay away from "the trap sound" since there are so many good producers that produce trap, but I've decided i will give it a try...What do you think?
Khaly Beatz
Newbie
Battle Points: 1
The drums are on point! Great work for a first attempt at a trap beat. Great variation too. Something I need to learn how to do.@2GooD Productions On "2nd Best"- I always listen closely for drum arrangement, and I feel that on this you can bring some fresh energy with variation in the drums at some point (like bringing in another element...loop or something) All the melodies and countermelodies here are composed good. The first melody can be dropped for a couple of bars or since is that repetitive...maybe switch it up with something not so harsh sounding element and push it in the back leaving space for the other melody or a rapper.
@Matt-D This remix is perfect, everything is well balanced in the mix...That piano is excellent, but maybe you can drop it for a couple of bars.
@Un4zn I can hear this in an action movie scene or something, it has soundtrack quality to it. That initial synth becomes a lil bit monotonous after a while, you can drop it couple bars,octave down or come up with something different. Mix sounds kind of flat to me, like you over compressed the master, you can bring down the hihat a notch. Your reverb use is good, although i think you can leave some elements drier, like your drums for example. Overall, nice experiment.
@Marc Duncan I don't what your goal is with this, but I must be honest and say I don't feel it at all. If it is just for fun, that's ok. What you can do with it is after the beat drops, go in a different direction with it, drop the habanera shit, or use smaller segments.
@Edgar Smooth beat, I really like it. Drums are on point, that snare/clap is warm. The bassline is nice, I think you can develop it more, I think you have space for something like that. I know is tough with this kind of beats, but you must have some kind of a switch up or middle section if you will...It gets a little repetitive after a while
@stcbeats That piano chops are dope. That clap can be brought down, i blink every time
@Kod4R Nice classic sound on both of these, Nice jazz chops on Chill Mood. Hard is well...hard. I like it.
@jihun9554 This is interesting, it has variety of styles in it. Mixing can be improved on all of your tracks.
@skidflow Nice sounds on your beat, kind of a minimalistic approach i guess...Very relaxing. That string sound though..that can be scrapped...it doesn't fit...and 11minutes?
@Fantom 91 This can be in a movie scene that takes place somewhere in the middle east Turkey for example
@Khaly Beatz That 808 kicks ass! The rest of the drums can be more upfront.
I tried to stay away from "the trap sound" since there are so many good producers that produce trap, but I've decided i will give it a try...What do you think?
Audiobellum
Beatmaker
All of the beats are good as usual. I'd say Flying Guitar is my favorite. The Fl Trap beat is giving me more of an Atlanta Trap/Dub step vid, I wasn't excepting that; Nice Phrygian melodies. Oh man, I haven't been here for a while. I guess is time to get back into the saddle. Here's a beat I've made recently. It's not the most hip hop sounding beat but, it's what I got right now and so feedback on it would be great.
crosstevsky
beats architect
Thanks Khaly. Sorry on such a small comment, you were the last one. I gave your beat a second listen, those hihats are dope. It needs variation but since it's freestyle beat...you can get away with it.
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