Good work. It sounds pretty clean, though I think the main kick could use some fine-tuning. But I like the beat and the panning of the main instruments.
I wasn't a fan of the video. My opinion: it could have worked better if it was more simple, i.e. just the camera on you, maybe with some B&W filters or something without all of the effects, considering it was made with limited equipment. Overall, I appreciate the artistic vision and it looks like you had fun messing around with the video effects. The 2nd verse sounds a bit different, not sure if the vocals were mixed different or if it's a different mic, but it didn't sound as clean as the rest.
The rapper's flow sounded off at times, but hey that's part of the business of trying to make it.
Thanks for sharing. Great to hear full songs instead of just beats