Memory Lane - Driving can be therapeutic :) (Feedback appreciated)

[MichaelsLife]

A bit different style for me, but it was fun stretching my talent a bit. Any feedback is welcome.

MichaelsLife - "Memory Lane"

 

[Rah.sool]

Ayy nice job brother! Awesome beat. A few feedbacks/opinions here man.
1. i'm not a fan of the main trumpet stabs playing throughout, it just feels a bit abrasive for me, maybe trying eqing or picking a different sound
2. I like the drums, I think they serve the melodies, I do feel like the snare fill being used is a little out of place at times, but just my opinion
3. Also I feel like the frequency space is very open most of the time. which may have been intentional. I would consider adding a pad or droning sound in the back to fill out some of the empty space

Nice work man!

 

[MichaelsLife]

Much appreciated Rah.sool! Those are some good points you make. Thanks for the feedback!

 

[TjombaBeats]

I think the stabs are kinda too much of the same i think. But the drums sound good. I like them keys in the beat.

 

[InsideOutBeats]

Instantly like the flow. Drum work nice! Motivational feel and vibe, good work.

 

[JustIn Flow]

Nice tune, specially the change at 0:45. And like Rah.sool said, the main trumpet sounds not really included. But well done!

 

[Phenri]

I'm digging the west coast vibes this beat gives off. I would personally add some kind of bassline in the back to fill it out a bit more, but you've done well with this one!

 

[2GooD Productions]

as already mentioned, changed the brass stabs for another instrument and this beat is good to go I think.
Everything works in the beat except the brass IMO