Marion Brown - Sweet Earth Flying, Pt.1
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2infamouz
Mad Beats, No Angry Vegetables
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BandOfProducers
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I'm feeling the whole vibe fam...
42 sec switchup, dope asf
really dope flip man, love the drums, the snare could smack more but thats opinion.
BandOfProducers
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The way it ride and the keys you brought in.. Dope flip
BandOfProducers
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Preciate you, looking forward to your flip.
Mike Chief
ILLIEN
ill o.g.
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@Dez-NYCe Definitely diggin the vibe. I think it needs a little bit of glue to make all elements a bit more cohesive. You got some frequencies kinda clashing together a bit, and I feel like panning some of the instruments a little more would definitely open up some space. Pretty solid though mang.
@2infamouz Word, Im feelin it. Drums are super solid, but I agree with 2good wishing the snare slapped a little harder. Fuckin dope.
@BandOfProducers I like the flip here, nice choice of sample. Love how there is movement in the track and how the drums keep on switching up. Kinda wish there were a few more elements to the track as far as instrumentation. Other than that this is dope. Good shit.
@2infamouz Word, Im feelin it. Drums are super solid, but I agree with 2good wishing the snare slapped a little harder. Fuckin dope.
@BandOfProducers I like the flip here, nice choice of sample. Love how there is movement in the track and how the drums keep on switching up. Kinda wish there were a few more elements to the track as far as instrumentation. Other than that this is dope. Good shit.
2infamouz
Mad Beats, No Angry Vegetables
ill o.g.
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This really captured that improv jazz vibe. Kind of experimental too; interesting choices sonically I fw it.
I really like all the switch ups throughout it. The way ur playing w/ the snare from like 0:30-0:43ish was dope too.
Appreciate everyone's feedback I def agree bout the snare. Got hyperfocused on processing / layering the Rhodes chops and kinda lost sight of the other instruments in the mix
Kane the MOD
Grey haired Boom Bap Rap Dad
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Really a dope flip. Great stuff.
Kane the MOD
Grey haired Boom Bap Rap Dad
Battle Points: 6
IMHO the drums are really the star in your beat. Dope drum game.
Dez-NYCe
ILLIEN
i like that baseline.dope work
3mpireV
Member
Battle Points: 10
the added instruments are really nice. The drums are unconventional. It's grooving. I like it a lot.
3mpireV
Member
Battle Points: 10
the melody you found in the song is beautiful and I think you chose the right bass and drum sound. The groove has to many pauses to me, it breaks the flow a little bit but this could be a really nice song.
3mpireV
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Battle Points: 10
The melody of the sample is very nice. The drum patterns for the different parts are all worikng very well by themselves. Some of the changes are working well too, but to me there are too many changes in the hi hat pattern. Anyway... I love this beat