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dacalion

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Yeah, we've all gotta do better with the feedback and this one just might be a great place to start. I'm predicting some dope flips outta this.
 

Precog

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will get on this bad boy as soon as i have the time!!! looking forward to hearing what people are gonna do with it
 
@Action Flav = I really like the piano chops. They sound cool. And the percussion is pretty smooth. My only opinion to change would be to add more change-ups throughout. I like the dropout after the chorus, but I think it's too long. Maybe just come back in on the snare rather than skipping a whole bar. Maybe some more instrumentation or just dynamic changes like dropping out the drums or something could help keep the song moving. I did enjoy the beat though for sure.

Here is my quick flip on it. Might have to put some more time in if I can/want to. I think the drums could be different and give the song a whole new vibe. Let me know what's up.

http://soundcloud.com/user8988974/you-make-it-happen-sample
 

dacalion

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Here's mine...I went with the smoothness =) Make It Happen

@ActionFlav - In my best Ja-Rule voice...It's muuur-daaaa, I luv the chops on this and the vocals was hot. Dope @$$ flip!

@djfeedme - Whoa! Sickness, man that snare is on point and the crunchness factor shoots the flip off the chart. Awesome my dude awe-some!
 

ActionFlav

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First of all thanks to djfeedme and dacalion for the feedback :)

@ djfeedme- Dope! Those Snares are dope, I'm feeling this beat. perfect work
@dacalion -Dope !i really like it , i like it with the voice , it's too smooth (Y)nice to chill with it. the piano chops are hot
 

smokaz

Beatmaker
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Hi all
Will try to make something with it got a lot of chop and have to find my way with these.

SO for the moment I will just give some feedback
djfeed realdope everything perfect init , great chops
actionflav I appreciate yours even if it is repetitive I really find interesting to rap on it.

dacalion men you're a sound killer .

I am pleased to find this placed I learn a lot from all I hear.
 
ill o.g.
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@ActionFlav -- This is something I would want to write to, it's a banger and it's catchy.It's a hit. Let me know if u down.

@ djfeedme- Nice. Sounds similar to the one I made for this sample so much, that I'm re doing mine. The instruments are ok, but it's the groove that stands out. Good job.

@dacalion- Those voices did it. Takes the beat to another level.
 

zenmnd

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Working on a flip right now. I might have it done by tomorrow or so, and if its late its cool, something to work on.
 

dacalion

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No problem, I'll leave it open for 1 more day, a few others showed interest so that'll give them some time as well. I'm gonna go ahead and post the next flip for those that are ready for it.
 
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