Made this beat last week...

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

Ruthless

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[Earsblower]

Hey there, first thing I heard was the "vocals" or "voices" I should say that are a bit too loud compared to everything else. Also the transitions are lacking, they do no sync well. As for the beat in general it sounds a bit chaotic and most of the sounds dont really fits with each others.

I know it's mostly negative but there's a lot of room for improvement and it's decent enough to know you can do it !

 

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

I appreciate your honest feedback...

 

[Earsblower]

Sure man, I know it can be tough sometimes but this is how you can become better with time. We all been there.

 

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

I appreciate your honest feedback

Sure man, I know it can be tough sometimes but this is how you can become better with time. We all been there.

For sure. Im new to this n want real opinions, so your feedback was helpful. I'm repost after I make changes too.

 

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

Made changes

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[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

I added guitars to give it a fuller sound..

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[stcbeats]

still needs a good mix. overall idea is good. mix mix mix and you got something bring the drums up especially the snare maybe add some verb or delay to it. the snare that is. keep going man

 

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

still needs a good mix. overall idea is good. mix mix mix and you got something bring the drums up especially the snare maybe add some verb or delay to it. the snare that is. keep going man

Thanks for the advice.. I appreciate it. Ima make those changes n repost.

 

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

Turned up the drums .. Im not sure how to use reverb or delay (kinda new to this). If it stills needs that, let me know

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[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

Worked on this a little today.. Is it sounding better?

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[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

I been tryna smooth out the transitions to this.. Idk I think it sounds better, but not sure it's where it could be. Does everything flow well?

Nothing here yet.

 

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

Worked on it today..

Fyyn3stSymphoni - "Ruthless (1)"

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[stcbeats]

Worked on it today..

Fyyn3stSymphoni - "Ruthless (1)"

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you deleted the newer posts. this mix definitely needs mixed better and the vocal at the beginning needs help but when that goes away the beat is banging. I'd roll the second part of the beat and keep that vocal piece very low in the background for the chorus or lose it all together

 

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

I deleted one since it would of been two of the same beat on the profile. But Im using 2 vocals n I think it's just overlapping in the beginning, so I'm work on that & try lowering the vocals for the chorus.

Thanks for the feedback, always helpful and much appreciated.

 

[Fyyn3stSymphoni]

I removed a lot of the vocals on this.. So does it blend well or still sound like it's overlapping?

Fyyn3stSymphoni - "Ruthless (2)"

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