Love Comes Last
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DPrezd Beggar
Banned
Battle Points: 22
Dunno if im just too dumb to listen to music properly now but idk man, its like im listening to it, i wanna like it since it is basically there. But on the other side it feels so busy and overloaded in my head(thats the part where my madness might be at fault xd) like the drums and the other stuff like melody were going the same path but on seperated ways not holding hands.
Feel like the drums could be matched way better with the samples. But it is still a solid concept you fleshed out, really want to love it, keep working on it.
Crispifier
The Real SlimSpaceship
Battle Points: 15
i really think that double kick right b4 the snare is lit. yeah this is some good stuff man feel the beat does everything it needs to and the mix sounds nice through headphones solid stuff dude i aint gonna give criticism if their aint nothing to criticize
InsideOutBeats
ILLIEN
Nice work here, love those drums agree with @Iron Keys on slightly containing the bass note and raising the quiet end one.
Sample chops are dope, loving the whole vibe, nice one
Sample chops are dope, loving the whole vibe, nice one
Rah.sool
Beatmaker
Thanks @Iron Keys and @InsideOutBeats on the bass note comment, i'll try to eq that thing a little bit to reel it in! And thanks to everyone else as well
Intro dope, sample chops dope, drums go well with it. Some things i've noticed:
I think the high BPM is kind of 'choking' your beat if that makes sense. Like mentioned before, there's a lot going on that it easily overloads the listener. Bass range is quite high, not really the sweet spot where it should be in. So maybe pitching everything down with a slower BPM would be a great improvement.
Rah.sool
Beatmaker
@TWU That's an awesome suggestion bro, makes sense. I'll definitely consider that when it comes to higher bpm beats. Thanks for that!
@OGBama Thanks brotha! Yea it's a tape start sound effect, spoken word is a clip of Barry White talking on a talk show, and the sample is "I'm gonna make love last this time" by the inclinations.
@OGBama Thanks brotha! Yea it's a tape start sound effect, spoken word is a clip of Barry White talking on a talk show, and the sample is "I'm gonna make love last this time" by the inclinations.
DPrezd Beggar
Banned
Battle Points: 22
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This is dope I think it would make a nice album outro track. The drums seem a little off from the vocal samples, that could be tightened up a little, the drums are fine when the vocal chops aren't there, they just aren't in the same groove as the vocals I think.