Illmuzik Film Character

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Haze47

THE URBAN ARCHEOLOGIST
ill o.g.
Right , seeing as atm i cant really make any musik, as i have to learn cubase and have no decent vst instruments, so i have decided to hark back to my first love, film. I am in the process of writng a feature screenplay, and i want a diverse main character and need yall help.
i am going to ask a series of questions over the next week or so, and develop a character and perhaps some sub plots, i will pick the best answer for each, question, tune in and watch the character grow....

question the first...

What is his or hers FULL NAME.....?

and please this is serious no BS
 

Guevara

BETTER THAN YESTERDAY
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 34
ARE U FoR REAL???
LET ME GET THiS STRAiGHT, YoU MAKE A MoViE BASED oN ALL oUR iDEAS AND ALL WE GET iS To WATCH THE GoOFY MoTHERFUCKER GRoW................
NAH iM JUST JoKiN, i WiSH i HAD AN iDEA To GiVE U BUT ALL MY iDEAS ARE NON-SERiOUS BS, BUT iF i Do FiND AN iDEA AND U BLoW UP..... iLL LET oNE oF MY FELLoW GREEDY ASS PEERS FiNiSH THAT STATEMENT.CiTY
 

Haze47

THE URBAN ARCHEOLOGIST
ill o.g.
haha, nice one city....that the basic idea, yea...i steal your ideas and make them into a film/screenplay...its a bit like sampling...hehe
 

Haze47

THE URBAN ARCHEOLOGIST
ill o.g.
ILLMUZIK FILM CHARACTER part 2

Question 2 - in order to understand a character and to give him/her the depth and feeling of being a real person with real emotions, you have to look at the parents, as we all know that due to conditioning and the way we are brought up will bring out different characteristics and manerisms, and a different view of life...

so ill start this one off - George (the father) born on Feb 29th 1940, born in London during the blitz. Obvioulsly times where hard when he was a baby/toddler as his father died in 1945 due to a troop carrying ship being scuppered on unseen rocks on the edge of French seas in the English channel. Because of this George has an animosity towards organised militia due to the "mistake" the navy made in regards to his father. He didnt take well to authority at school and got in with other "disenchanted" youths, and set about trying to defraud the newly set up English welfare State, set up by Atlee at the end of the war. He and his cronies get caught and because of the situation at the time were jdetained for 3 years without charge. His gang was convicted for 7years,(because of the state of the economy at the time the crime was commited) His son visited him throughout this period, where his father told him not to respect or get leaned on, by "the powers that be" He was released from prison early after 1 year, due to time already served, in 1961. George then went on to a petty form of street grifting, and began drinking, turning away from fraud, and more to petty crime. He continued this until about 1967, when he made a big mistake and killed a policeman in an armed robbery. He went down for life, and got shanked inside in 1975. and died.

Henrietta (mother) - born the day Georges father died, henry was from a young age brought up to fight her corner as time was rough. She spent her childhood on the streets, due to a lack of money, but was exceptionally bright. Her cleverness was seen by George, who seduced her and won her over. She basically laudered the money george made, through a flower shop. When george went down, she carried on the business on her own. But wothout geroge behind, it she got walked over by the big boys, and got run out of london, and took her son with her to leeds in 1968, where she lived on benfits, and money stolen from georges accounts, till 1975 when she too died, on the same day as george, shot whilst walking her dog, in Meanwood Park.

These are his parents, from this anyone got any ideas about him....

use this info to help form our hero....
 
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MIKELABZ

Guest
yea i was confused at ferst but i see wut ur saying... wuts the setting? or can we make that up too?

make the character distraught on whether he will follow the path of his dad or his mother... he eventually gets caught up in the ways of his peers who compare him to his notoriuos pop all the time.. and eventaully he becomes a crime lord against his will...shyt this begining to sound like the godfather... but anyway a robbery job goes wrong and he flees to the south where he tries to start new in mexico where he has to defend his family agianst angry luchadors that claim his land and his wife... and in the end he confronts his enemies with dual derty harry pistols... and gets shot in the back by undercover CIA agent that had been on his tail suspecting him of being a drug dealer... in the end credits the son of the main character picks up the hammer... and shoots the CIA agent just as he's making a call to confirm the slaying to his overseers... but u dont see the shot u heard the chamber click just as the screen goes blank.

+--^----------,--------,-----,--------^-,
| ||||||||| `--------' , |--------- - - ----] -------- BANG
`+---------------------------^----------|'
`\_,---------,---------,--------------'
/ XXXXXX /'| /'
/ XXXXXX / `\ /'
/ XXXXXX /`-------'
/ XXXXXX /
/ XXXXXX /
(________(
`------'


L-Rock
 

Haze47

THE URBAN ARCHEOLOGIST
ill o.g.
nice on rock, now thats what im talking about......a basic stroy has been formed, cool i like it a lot, change ups, twists, drugs, money , killings, beatings, you know....!

keep it coming....! where did he go school? was he clever like his mum? did he go to college? does he take drugs? all of these things are important.

You have to know your charactwer inside out. Even if the audience doesnt need to know he went to Oxford or something, we the writers do...we need to be able to explain his actions, and know what he would do in a certain situation etc....Rock you rock...nice
 
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MIKELABZ

Guest
lets say that he dropped outta high school to start werk asap. since his mom and dad died he had to take care of his yunger bros and sisters... and the only stable job he could find was illegal... and it paid good money... and thats the only reason why he never stopped werrking the streets... and his instinct was of survival... he made sure to cover his tracks wherevewr he went he made sure he knew the way out of any situation before he enetered... he's a true crook and stays clean to stay clear headed... he does drink while in mexico tho and thats part of the reason why he gets killed... because he gets sloppy...

hows that for starters... by the way i suggest making up and old industrial town located between maryland and rochester, NY... the journey to mexico will be long enuff to gain ground on character developement.

L-Rock
 
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MIKELABZ

Guest
ok i got a name for the guy... jacob vance...jake for short
about 6'1 solid build solid darlk hair with tons of moose in it... no facial hair.. and wears skully's and navy coats in the winter... and muscle sherts in the summer...

another thing... i found the illmuzik mascot!!!

L-Rock
 

Guevara

BETTER THAN YESTERDAY
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 34
DAMN U GoT SoME CRoOKED FiNGERS...LOL
LAV HAS A SCARLETT LETTER oN HiS MiDDLE FinGER.HAHA
 

Haze47

THE URBAN ARCHEOLOGIST
ill o.g.
right our main man....

Jake Vance...
DoB - 23 April 1953

Jake was born during his fathers fraud period. Growing up around criminals and low lifes from when he was born. But to Jake they were an extended family, everyone looking out for each other. He obviously, as children do, tried to emulate his father, and started grifting the local rich kids. He was distraught when his hero of the time, his father was humitiated by the police and sent down. This was too much for Jake to handle, and in the period his father was being detained without charge, he didnt visit him once. He was too embarresed that his dad had been caught, and vowed he would rather die than be caught. His father, however when he did start visiting, imparted valuble street knowledge to the kid, and taught him the value of antidisestablishmentarialism. He get compared to father everywhere he goes, in his small borough, his mates even compare him to his dad. He loaths the comparisson as he hates the fact his father was "beaten" by the law. So he goes about to prove his critics wrong...but, not by going straight and using his street knowledge to good effect in the real world, as his girlfriend wishes, but becomes a more extream version of his father and as a result, goes a tad OTT, in the enforcement of his "law", he get more and more insane the longer he stays in his home ville and eventually decides to make a big move on a diamond wholesale store. He and his gang prepare the mission, but due to his increasing madness the robbery goes ary because his gang turn on him. he is forced to flee alone, that same day, only wearing the clothes he put on in the morning. THE FALL OF SHAME. He flees south to Mexico/France. Followed by the undercover fed/cia/flying squad who suspect him wrongly of being a drug dealer due to his dealings in his home town. He has escaped justice in the states. But still the memories of his father failure still haunts him. So he decides to go back and get the all of his money he has accumulated, and give a final fuck you to the system that ruined his life. So he returns and plans his last job, the job that will restore in his mind the honour he and his family lacked. He manages to get his money and "kill" his gang, we empathise with him a lot at this stage. But the CIA agent bitter that his investigation into jake as a drug dealer had taken up 5 years of his life, on a flase lead. Kills our hero, and takes his money. But inside Jake is happy, because he remained true to his vow that he would rather die, than surrender.
 
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MIKELABZ

Guest
sounds good... the CIA agent needs to die tho... how about jake owes money and theres a mob guy following him also along with the CIA agent and when the agent kills jake the mob guy kills the agent and says something real cool like ... "don corliotto sends his regards" and then spits on the agent... that way the criminals prevail... and adds an ironic twist..

L-Rock
 

Haze47

THE URBAN ARCHEOLOGIST
ill o.g.
i like it....

Right now lets think on....

The CIA man, tell us about him...a brief history...

this is the primary research, we will construct the full main structure of the story once we know all of our lead roles...
 
M

MIKELABZ

Guest
well he's on this case following puerto rican drug lords... one of whom jake merders....

ok here the story on that... in jakes town there was a monopoly on cocaine and when it spreads to jake's family it gets jake hert deep inside... so instead of setting down house rules he decides to make rules for his town and starts knocking off drug delears that he finds selling coke to little kids... he does this with the help of his buddies with baseball bats... after awhile jake realizes that theres money beyond his wildest dreams in crime... anyway the local drug lord sends a hitman after jake... a friend of jake asks to borrow his car and doesnt come back alive... in fact just as the car was pulling into the driveway he hears the bullet shot and follows the assasin on his little sister's bike... (**whew** i hope you get an "a" on this)... he finds out where the drug lord lives and poses as a puerto rican dealer who has useful information on the rival gangs in the area... the greedy drug lord kindly invites him into his home but searches jake before letting him enter... they spot his gun but take it any old way thinking that drug dealers are supposed to have guns...so they go upstairs and jake spots this knife collection in the hallway... so jake stabs the drug lord in the heart... the drug lord screams loudly as his body clutters down the staircase... the body guards stop smoking long enuff to give chase... a jake catapults out of a window... the CIA smashes thru the front door and kills the bodyguards... jake thinks that he has escaped but he is being followed secretly by sam denkins the third...

sam hasnt been the hot shot agent he was of the past... in fact some say he has lost his touch... he's a stocky build with dim eyes and a cigar hanging from his lips... he werks alone... these days nobody enjoys his company.... he is the most respected CIA agent on the east coast of the mississippi river and is only rivaled by his expartner tom delhomme who has just had a big time CIA promotion out in LA, california... sam is looking for his big debut into the higher ranks of the CIA and has been tracking this drug lord for 2 years and now he is the only one with a lead on this "new" drug lord...jake... so instead of busting him on the spot... he follows him quietly to his home... u can elaborate more on how he follows jake without being caught on your own time...

L-Rock
 
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