Love the asymmetric drums/percussion.
It's very difficult to get out of typical "straight" grooves and I admire anyone who does it as tastefully as this.
I like the bass and subtle use of pitch shift/mod. The keys serve as the back-bone of this track and I really like the old school tape effect on them.
Synth pads (horns??) add a great level of harmony and ambience.
There are soo many good things going on in this track...the only problem is my ears can't pick them out. being a bit more deliberate on the mix, carving out each element with EQ and automating levels to allow certain elements to peak in and out as it relates to telling the story would 1) help the overall experience and 2) give you cues for arrangement.
Love this!