Earsblower
Listen closely... Closer...
Just finished cooking this one, it is still pretty hot
Tried something new, maybe it'll work, maybe not. Share you feedback please and thanks.
Deep Mysteries
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Just finished cooking this one, it is still pretty hot
Tried something new, maybe it'll work, maybe not. Share you feedback please and thanks.
Kane the MOD
Grey haired Boom Bap Rap Dad
Battle Points: 6
Just finished cooking this one, it is still pretty hot
Tried something new, maybe it'll work, maybe not. Share you feedback please and thanks.
Good job.
I think it takes a bit too long until the (good) counter melody is introduced. I would add at least one other instrument to change it up a bit more.
With my Bose in-ear-plugs it feels like the kick / 808 is overpowering the rest of the beat. What I also like to hear in this types of beats is to drop out the 808 and replace it with a synth bass for some sections of the track.
I'm with @Kane the MOD on this one, bass is overpowering, I also think like he said about dropping the 808 style bass occasionally, or even just once, and replace it with something else for a section. The sound that comes in from the very beginning is a bit dominant in the mix and has some annoying harmonics about it. The annoying frequencies would clash with a vocal and I would recommend a bell shaped EQ cut in the higher mid frequencies to tame it and give room for vocals. Also even just take it out completely at some point, like a change up, and replace it with something else for a little while. Just little changes that keep things interesting as the track progresses. It only takes some really subtle changes to make a repetitive beat more interesting. Concentrating on the ends of each 8 and 16 bars and putting changes there is a great place to start when making a basic loop into a full track and developing some song structure.
Earsblower
Listen closely... Closer...
Thanks guys for the feedback and taking the time to listen. It is always gold to have those.
InsideOutBeats
ILLIEN
Exactly what @Kane the MOD and @2GooD Productions said. I get the deep mysteries vibe especially at 1.15 but not enough variety, a good change up there would have kept the beat interesting, I like the overall concept though.