Declik-Osaka's Bunny

[Declik]

Dear fellow producers and friends

Hope you are doing well preparing for X-Mas with your family and relatives .

In the meantime here's abtrack I'd like to share . All feedbacks are welcome and thanks for taking the time to listen



Take care

 

[Rah.sool]

Ayy very nice job here. There is definitely some dissonance occurring throughout the track. I would say make sure that all melodies are in the same key. Other than that i'm feeling the vibes. Nice job and merry christmas!

 

[Declik]

Ayy very nice job here. There is definitely some dissonance occurring throughout the track. I would say make sure that all melodies are in the same key. Other than that i'm feeling the vibes. Nice job and merry christmas!

Thanks a ton for your feeds . Dissonance means the notes aren't going well together or some sounds are hurting ears ? I have to look at it .. thanks

 

[InsideOutBeats]

Creative beat however I feel a lot is going on with regular changes but it doesn’t fit together well as a whole. I’m not sure which but when the bass line comes in, somethings off out of key.

 

[InsideOutBeats]

Ayy very nice job here. There is definitely some dissonance occurring throughout the track. I would say make sure that all melodies are in the same key. Other than that i'm feeling the vibes. Nice job and merry christmas!

Just read this so yeah dissonance / off key with something in there but I really noticed it when the bass came in so check the key off that to your other elements / tracks.

 

[Declik]

Creative beat however I feel a lot is going on with regular changes but it doesn’t fit together well as a whole. I’m not sure which but when the bass line comes in, somethings off out of key.

@InsideOutBeats you are totally right ... after listening again I could noticed .. Thabks for thoses feedz