Broken Promises

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hosie

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 9
Lo-fi vibes. Nice drop a 1:20. I'd have had the drums come back in sooner though to keep the momentum going. The sample / part at 1:46 is great, I'd have liked to have heard it dropped in more throughout the beat. Really nice beat!
 

BiggChev

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 11
Love the intro!

I'm not a trap fan myself, but the drums and 808s work with this. The changes and elements sprinkled throughout the beat are super cool and keep in interesting. Maybe one criticism is that some of the elements don't fit together with each other. I picked out the following:
Lo-Fi bit crushing
Trap beats/808s
Eletronica synths
house style filter/noise sweeps
Ballad-esque piano
Squelchy DnB style bass synths

While all nice on their own maybe streamlining the choice of sounds may work to elevate the entire package as one cohesive offering.

Otherwise, I enjoyed it!
 

couch trax

Member
Battle Points: 14
omg bro, this goes so hard and your mix sounds clear too, it reminds me of some the beats on logics mixtape albums. mad props yo.
just joined here today, hope to hear more bangers come from you
your counter melody, the shakes synth one could be a little louder for my taste BUT the track would be fine without the volume adjustment too
 
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