big anthem-feel jay-z/rick ross/ye type beat

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Dusty B

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 37
You post a hell of a lot asking for feedback but I dont see you giving much. Give and take bro, fair is fair, this is a community not a self promotion site. We need to help each other grow, no man is an island.
What do you think of the hook I'm writing?

Haters wanna hate
Lovers wanna love
I don't even want
None of the above
I want to piss on you
yes I do I piss on you
I'll pee on you
drip, drip, drip
 
Im not a hater, you have the talent of a roast potata,
this site doesnt exist just to make you greater,
you piss, you miss, ya far too late bruh,
walking on ice but ya no ice skater,
what you think is dripping is just you slipping,
me throwing kicks and you backflipping,
blows to the nose makes the blood flow,
rivers running to seas, from an epic nose bleed,
like moses Ill part the red sea, leave you on your knees,
with only Fades cock left to please.
 

Dusty B

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 37
Im not a hater, you have the talent of a roast potata,
this site doesnt exist just to make you greater,
you piss, you miss, ya far too late bruh,
walking on ice but ya no ice skater,
what you think is dripping is just you slipping,
me throwing kicks and you backflipping,
blows to the nose makes the blood flow,
rivers running to seas, from an epic nose bleed,
like moses Ill part the red sea, leave you on your knees,
with only Fades cock left to please.
tbh the only reason im not on here more is because i've been using discord more and it's easier to manage all of the various servers/communities im part of. admittedly whenever I post my new beats to the showcase/beats channels elsewhere, it's been part of my 'process' to post here too. i'll leave feedback more here though
 
tbh the only reason im not on here more is because i've been using discord more and it's easier to manage all of the various servers/communities im part of. admittedly whenever I post my new beats to the showcase/beats channels elsewhere, it's been part of my 'process' to post here too. i'll leave feedback more here though
Its cool man, its just giving a little back while you take thats all. Im not trying to just single you out, just giving you a headsup, its in the showcase forum rules to give feedback to others too.

There are some other newer members that do it too, but you have been here a while and do post a lot so I thought it would be a good time to remind you of the Showcase rules. From my experience here and at other forums in the past, the forums where everybody just selfishly promoted and took took took no longer exist, whereas illmuzik still does, it helped build community among the producers when they actually shared their ideas, everyone involved grew and became a better artist as a result. Thats my personal experience anyway.
 
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