StoneLockProd
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Thanks man. As for the vocals. Did the second verse sounds better? Because those were mine. It was hard taking the Vinnie acapella and getting it to sit the same as my recorded verse so I made some decisions to compromise between the two.Dope beat. Really nice mix. Dope vocals. ill for using Vinnie, I got gassed when I heard that.
Despite that, me personally wrote the beat off fair quick, which when listening analytically now, surprises me a bit. But I usually start off instinctual with my judging.
I think what caused the issue, is the drums being a little too busy during the verse --- sounded perfect in the break leading in to the vocals. I think with the raps, it sounded a little too busy, possibly cause of the way it felt like a constant fill.
Something about the track had a hurried/rush feel, in terms of the pace of it. I think it's just this small detail that maybe took away from the track. 'cause can't fault anything else, only praise.
I dunno if the vocals sounded a bit boxy/covered, even tho levels good, I felt like the snare(for example) took more priority in the mix, like the vocals seemed to fit around it, as if they took the hit to let the snare sit where it does. I could hear them clear, but it just felt a bit like they were 2nd place to the snare, like sonically the balance wasn't right. This is all real subtle things I'm talking.
Solid solid effort. You're really not far off getting a W I'm telling you.
I hear you with the busyness and the rushed feel. I felt it myself. I had to speed up Vin’s verse quite a bit. My verse of course I was able to write to so prolly sounded better in that regard.
I’ll take these remarks into consideration when I get this prepped for YouTube.