I'm sure all the stuff that guy mentioned and the way he mentioned them were used to make you buy his book. However, there are some musical elements that make up a hit song.
Memorable Melody....if you have one you have a hit, if you don't you have 95% of the shit out there. Think about it, what do you think of when you're remembering a song you like....the melody! This works with all styles, pop, classical, jazz, whatever.
Chord Structure....Everyone knows the majority of songs are based around 3 or 4 chords. Some nowadays just have one or two chords. If you check out some songwriting books they break it down to song specific chords, but for here, just know that most songs are built on the 1, 4, 5, progression, with the occasional 2 or 6 thrown in.
Groove....The majority of hit songs have a specical groove or feeling. Timbo comes to mind cause most of his songs have a cool groove, but even older songs and classical songs can be described as having that unique groove element.
Song Structure....the majority of hits out there have the exact same structure...check it out....count of the bars of certain sections of your favourite songs, you'll find out that they're a lot closer than you'd think. Now that doesn't mean that you can't be creative when coming up with a song, or you can't change around the sections, but history has shown that there are a few song structures that really hit home with listeners..
I can come up with some more, but those are some of the key elements I look for and have noticed through my own listening experiences.
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