SMILE u Phuck
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Dusty B
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 37
I like the title!
Has a cool chill ambient feel to it. The thumbnail and vibe feels like a scene where a serial killer is planning how he's going to kill his next victim, so this could get spun into a track like that.
I like the hat pattern and the repetitive melody. Mix sounds a little rough and lofi but can't tell if that's what you were going for. I'm also hearing a general too much of something over top, I think it might be reverb.
Overall I like the vibe!
InsideOutBeats
ILLIEN
Vocal intro nice touch, I love a vocal film quote or play with a vocal snippet.
Low end comes through real nice, feel that heavy bass!
Would like to hear that snare / clap higher, more crisp. Very rare I say this but even the hats could to with a bit more volume.
Love the vibe as Dusty said, got that serial killer vibe, dark, stalking the prey type shit!
Beat is dope just feels a bit murky and could do with a little bit of the highs coming through.
Could well be your choice and sound.
Low end comes through real nice, feel that heavy bass!
Would like to hear that snare / clap higher, more crisp. Very rare I say this but even the hats could to with a bit more volume.
Love the vibe as Dusty said, got that serial killer vibe, dark, stalking the prey type shit!
Beat is dope just feels a bit murky and could do with a little bit of the highs coming through.
Could well be your choice and sound.
loneone
LoneOneBeats
Battle Points: 4
I appreciate the feedback I'm still learning and figuring things out so all this is just practice until I get some real equipment I make everything on bandlab right now
InsideOutBeats
ILLIEN
That’s all good man, I’m still learning too, it never really stops, enjoy the process.
That’s good stuff for just bandlab but like anything, put the hours in and understand how to make your best music with what you have at hand currently.
Nice one!
That’s good stuff for just bandlab but like anything, put the hours in and understand how to make your best music with what you have at hand currently.
Nice one!
Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
Like the vocals in the intro, it sets the dark tone for the rest of the beat. Definitely got a serial killer vibe to it.
Well done tho... I use bandlab too and fairly new to beat making. It can be tough to get the sounds just right when that's the only tool ur using, especially when ur starting out. But overall the beat is dope. Good work.
Well done tho... I use bandlab too and fairly new to beat making. It can be tough to get the sounds just right when that's the only tool ur using, especially when ur starting out. But overall the beat is dope. Good work.