Showcase - May 30 - June 5, 2016

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DH music

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Battle Points: 2
Is it just me but as soon as i post a beat here and i listen to it im like godammit i should had change this and that LOL
 

Charles

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@Solo The first one is nice but its lacking some substance. Feels like it is missing something the sound is kind of empty. I do dig a few of the samples and that 808.
For your second beat i like the pro era sample in the intro. This one is super chill. I really like the kick, it works really well with the other elements of the song, nice work!

@DH music dont worry im pretty sure we all feel that way after a release haha. Very unique beat. I like the groove a lot those drums are quite simple but work very well. I feel like i need one bright synth to come in at some point, might just be my style though, either way good work dude

@producedbyRiff Looks like this week we both went for a drake kind of vibe haha. I like the beat a lot. the work on the sample is sick. The drums work but the loop does not. You need to mix up the drums a bit so they are not always the same. The song in general feels like a loop. Try some automation to switch it up in parts.

Here is my latest beat

Here is a beat i produced, my friend rapped over it
 

DeCrescendo

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Battle Points: 20
@Solo Not too keen on the intro in the first beat but sounds good once the drums kick in. I like the second beat more. Freestyle at the start sounds really good. Very chilled beat.

@DH music Beat is decent. Think the snares and drums could be punchier and the mix sounds like it could be a bit louder.

@producedbyRiff Nice atmospheric beat! sounds really good. Vocal sample is subtle but works really well.

@Charles Delusion - Very chilled beat. Like the way it builds up slowly. Didnt like the drums at first but they carry the beat well. I think before is a stronger beat. Haunting melody! Works well with the vocals.

Here is my newest beat, It's a 2PAC remmix. Slower than what I normally make, Let me know what you think:

 
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tomkillsjerry

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Battle Points: 128
@Solo first beat was fire bro dig the second one but that first one is nice!
@DH music idk i cant put my finger on it but it just sounds kind of bland and robotic do you play your drums in or program them? that may be it
@producedbyRiff pretty dope beat reminds me of clams casino very chill
@Charles dope productions all around very laid back smooth vibes sub maybe a touch high but other than that nice work
@DeCrescendo like the change up for that tupac track nice work

From the tkj vault

 

Hadoq

Producing weird shit since 2002
@Solo
takeoff, great intro, nice beat, I like your textures, with the vocal samples and pads and all, nice bass too
XLVII, nice feel right away, very jazzy smooth, harmonically sound, it reminds of some old stuff from the old common albums, very soulful.
nice scratches too, is that you? or are they samples.
Loving the soprano saxophone too, this beat tickles me in all the right places.

@DH music the composition is nice, but the sounds are a little on the weak side, the mix also sounds fairly flat, but yea I like what you're doing, what are you using hardware/software?

@producedbyRiff Sound wise, it's fairly clean, but it's both repetitive and not very original. I'm sure if you get out of the "drake type beats" and whatnot, do your own music, it'll be killer, you definitely have the skills and sound. But this one sounds impersonal, just more of the same.

@Charles
Delusion, smooth and mellow, I like the filtered drums (why did you leave the hats out of the filter?), nice and mellow vibe, but the drums could sound a tad bit clearer at times, not a big fan of the snare, great atmosphere, I like it very much.

Before, yeap, this is right up my alley, loving the atmosphere, great track! I love the different parts too

@DeCrescendo Great work man, nothing much to say, not a big fan of the "mainstream" vibe, hat rolls and whatnot, but it's well put together. Quality is there, not a big fan of the general style, I'd like to hear you on something more personal.

@tomkillsjerry
whole world talkin
Liking the chops and all, well done here, powerful sound. I'd like a louder clap tho, if only at times. You're gonna like one of my tracks too, similar vibe.

The consequences of consciousness
diggin the title, about the music, we're on the same page this week I think, creepy stuff, fat bass and whatever, great drums, I'd like a tad bit more harmony and variations here tho. I like the come up tho, it becomes much more powerful after that.

@outfizzy
Chill track, well put together, but it gets repetitive at some point. The piano sounds a little cheap/midi/automated/unnatural/repetitive too.
The work is nice, but the general sound lacks texture, originality and depth. You got your sound on point, now it's time to work on the music ;)


alright, my turn now, got some new gear so it's time to showcase what I've done with it
This is today's beat, very agressive, very noisy too


and a beat from last week, something more mellow
 
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ChapoDinero

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GOLD (INSTRUMENTAL) 19 year old producer Chapo Dinero - Feedback for feedback. Much love

 
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Royce Dior

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Hello everybody. New to the forum might as well upload some beats on this thread.

 
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ChaseF

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@eelxb- Song was really dope, I think everything you did was cut and dry and to the point, a fresh sound and a fresh beat.

@Royce Dior I liked the vibe, the kick was really punchy which is good.

@44Beatzz - This beat is really unique, reminds me of video games and movies. I like it.

@Hadoq - Very unique choice of sounds and vocal samples, not everyone can pull it off but you can.

Not sure if I we're allowed to upload beats with vocals recorded, if not someone please put me on game, as you can see I am a newbie!

But nevertheless I produced the track and here it is::

 

DeCrescendo

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Battle Points: 20
@tomkillsjerry First track is massive! A great mix as always and a really big intro but I actually preferred your second track. Really interesting! Good work.
@Hadoq First tune is crazy! You have some interesting sounds in the second tune but sounds like it needs another part to it to mix it up a bit. Cheers for the feedback as always. Going to get some more personal songs on here soon. Just got a new audio interface so been working with guitar a lot more this week!
@ChapoDinero This sounds a little unfinished to me. Drums need to be much louder and punchier.
@S.K. MUSIC My favourite beat of this week's showcase! Very soulful and punchy bass. Awesome.
@44Beatzz This beat has got some potential but I think it would benefit from having a few quieter moments throughout to mix it up a bit.
@Royce Dior Punchy drums but definitely needs another layer of something. A lead synth or something.
@eelxb Nice beat. Could imagine Kool AD over the top of this! Really good job,
@ChaseF This song has potential. I would replace the kick drums and turn the bass up louder. Maybe needs another layer of something to tie the vocals and the beat together a bit better.


If you haven't checked my tune out yet any feedback would be appreciated. Got my new speakers yesterday so I can finally start to get a balanced mix!
 
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