I was put off with the hi hats on this one. I think it gets a little too repetitive too. Needs some room to breathe and open up. The whole mix seems a little over-compressed too? I'd quite like to hear it without the vocals and give more feedback. I actually think remixing a track with that many vocal styles is very difficult.
The vocal isnt in the same scale as the beat, I think you could do more panning to add some width to the beat and add a bassline too, because the one there has been compressed out of existence. Overall the beat feels thin and compacted within a certain frequency range instead of taking advantage of the full spectrum.
Ok gotcha I was trying something out with compression, like you said I got a bassline but I put compression on that and a synth I used. Had to experiment to see if that would work