"Ayo Dawg" (WC style beats with cello ...^^)

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OneOneProds

Oz"Beatz
This thing is dope but feels like standing in a waiting line forever. You wait for something to happen like piano chords or maybe even some higher note strings but it just doesnt happen. Like a woman is flirting with you all day, you get her to your place, drink some for hours and she just falls asleep.
At 1st- thank you very much fo da time you took . you are right, too linear, we expect something that will never come... I understand. I'm going to work on it, this music at more than 10 years old, I put it online, way too early. This title is clearly not finished. Thank you very much.Really appreciate it bro'
 

DPrezd Beggar

Banned
Battle Points: 22
At 1st- thank you very much fo da time you took . you are right, too linear, we expect something that will never come... I understand. I'm going to work on it, this music at more than 10 years old, I put it online, way too early. This title is clearly not finished. Thank you very much.Really appreciate it bro'
I mean the stuff you already got is really dope, if it wasnt crackin, i wouldnt even give fuck about whats coming next, but fr, let this you have be like it is and just add something to it, doesnt really have to be that much, simple piano chords here and there and you got a banger.
 
Man dope drums and cello, real nice but needs like an additional something…anything as was just so repetitive. Add piano or violin to match that quality and you have a fire beat.

Seriously painful listening to the end like ground hog day with nothing else coming but you add that extra element and this is golden!
 
This thing is dope but feels like standing in a waiting line forever. You wait for something to happen like piano chords or maybe even some higher note strings but it just doesnt happen. Like a woman is flirting with you all day, you get her to your place, drink some for hours and she just falls asleep.

Nah even flirting would add a little something extra before you get to your or her place :ROFLMAO:
 
Like people have said it gets a bit repetetive, but as a basis for a solid beat its good IMO. Play around with some drum variation maybe a few other instruments coming in maybe only just once or twice, but it just spreads some of the variation away from just those strings that come in at the end of the 8"s and 16 bars
 

TWU

The.Widely.Unknown
Scott Storch Dj GIF by REVOLT TV
 
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