@Klypse
I think the snare is a bit too loud,
in the second part I would differentiate the volume of the double hit snare (made the first one a bit quiter) , now the double hit sounds unnatural.
I like the general use of the sample, but IMHO it lacks in the bass department. Adding a good bass would make it better. I don't like the harshness and sibilance in the "Mr sandman give me a dream" - it almost hurts my ears.