Your version is way better than the original IMO. Not your fault (obviously), but I find the hook irritating. Otherwise, I'm really digging the beat, the bassline, synths, acapella placement... everything is point.
Thanks @InsideOutBeats . About my output, I have this crazy idea of uploading 500 remixes to YouTube in the next 2 years.... building a large catalogue if you will. Quality will suffer a bit, but I'm okay with that.