Showcase SHOWCASE: August 17-24, 2025

Tiny Chops

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 29
Awkward Dance GIF by MOODMAN


 

BiggChev

The Brown Mr. Lahey
Battle Points: 230
@2GooD Productions

Grinding - The broken piano chords with the panning delay is a nice foundation for this! I like that you used, what sounds like a square synth, to pluck out complimentary notes from the piano arpeggios. Then you have the subtle rhodes picking up on the chords but used as a rhythmic element. Cool departure from your typical drums. One nit pick, check the chord on the strings at 0:21. Sounds like the middle note is flat or the top note is sharp. I'm assuming you were trying to massage them to blend with the vocals (which are a nice touch). If you can't get them quite perfectly, I think the chord at 0:19 could fit with the vocals. Otherwise, really cool and I like that you used different sounds and drum style!

Hardstyle - Did not see this going from early 90s smooth jazz to choral! In fact, I don't think most people could actually pull a switch like that off. I like the space you have on the drums. It's almost got an industrial quality as it kinda sounds like the drum kit sitting in an empty warehouse. Not sure if it was a cognizant choice; but that space on the drums matches the choral vocals nicely. Sound/sample selection choice is good too. All elements fit well together - and for how ambitious the track is, it doesn't feel TOO cluttered or aimless. I think longer arrangements with big changes and a lot of elements can lose their direction, but you do a good job of bringing everything back and putting a nice little bow on it.

@DJ Excellence

Smooth and silky! Grosso Modo = "Phat Style"? Not familiar with the original but the vocals have this golden era flow and the beat does a good job accentuating that. I thought the vocals were maybe a bit low in the mix, which is fine because the beat is super dope! I've tried years to get that paper-sizzle snare with just the right decay length! Love this!
 

DJ Excellence

ILLIEN
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 319
@DJ Excellence

Smooth and silky! Grosso Modo = "Phat Style"? Not familiar with the original but the vocals have this golden era flow and the beat does a good job accentuating that. I thought the vocals were maybe a bit low in the mix, which is fine because the beat is super dope! I've tried years to get that paper-sizzle snare with just the right decay length! Love this!

Thanks a lot for the review. In French, “Grosso Modo” means “roughly speaking.” I also got a nice nod from DJ Horg, the producer, deejay, and second emcee on the track. He’s an important figure in the Montreal Hip Hop scene, so that really meant a lot.
 

BiggChev

The Brown Mr. Lahey
Battle Points: 230
Thanks a lot for the review. In French, “Grosso Modo” means “roughly speaking.” I also got a nice nod from DJ Horg, the producer, deejay, and second emcee on the track. He’s an important figure in the Montreal Hip Hop scene, so that really meant a lot.

That's pretty dope! Appreciate the Franco remixes, putting me onto some dope hip-hop I missed or only vaguely remember.
 

attila

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 68

I can't give you any suggestioni on beatmaking, Just a feedback as a listener. I feel very much Grinding. That ta-ta of the snare at the end of the bar Is brilliant. Where Hard Style Is a flawleas bit, Grinding has something more for my ears, like it's more focused into a mood, more espressive. All the technicalities we try to learn ultimately serve this purpose: to express and evoke an emotion. They are tools at the service of this goal, rather than just skills in themselves (except for the nerd beatmakers). i can hear those skills well used in both beats. All of this can be subjective; however in my humble opinion, Grinding aligns better with this objective due to qualities that are harder to identify on a strictly technical level, namely the ability to move emotions.
 
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